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wierd thing

Posted to Action Poetry

a wierd thing happened... at first i didn't like this song/poem so much... and then i re-read it and there's actually something really interesting in the almost childish rhyme... maybe you could actually add more to it, because it's really growing on me.. yeah, just re-read it again and it just gets better and better, reminds me of a john lennon poem "I sat belonely Under a tree/ a little lady sing to me..." yeah, i really like this one actually.