i really like your poem. i even liked your first draft even if it wasn't clear because when your talking to yourself you usually don't make sense. (at least i don't)
anyways, it made me think of the past and how i'm always trying to run away from it like i dreamt about my ex of 2 years last night and it pissed me off and i don't know what to tell myself about it.
enough about that
anyways, just thought i tell you that i loked it and can see myself in it
keep posting your words, they rock