bless you joan anderson
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by sparklejames on 2001-03-30 17:01:00
cy/ i agree that the rhythm is disrupted but i thought the joan anderson part stopped the poem becoming repetitive and clunky, kinda shook up the reader and made them ponder before continuing, when i read this for some reason i gazed fondly upwards at the joan part... i hate very formulaic regular rhyming poems, so great writing...sj
