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i think that's it...

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i may insert another more potent 'epiphany' between the final two parts, to 'lead into' solution...

but besides that... how does the finished piece read in your eyes?

thanks ladies, guys, for the page space (hope it was ok to use so much - it was one of those experimental daze)

:)

I hope i get some responses on this, as to the poem, and the poems world view etc....
i find myself very proud of it... i think i was possessed there, for a few hours.

Peace,
John