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I really like this...

Posted to Action Poetry




...fast paced. Surreal. stream-of-consciousness. It zips down the page like a fleeting thought. And that's what this poem feels like to me, "a fleeting thought". It's almost as if the narrator is sifting through his/her memory for a lost idea. I think the title sort of reinforces this notion of fleeting information since it looks like computer language flowing along an electrical stream.