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Posted to Action Poetry

.. er i mean

i enjoyed yer rhyming, enLightningOne.
you always make me smile.
no hackneyed, dumb or frightning ones!
i truly dig your style.

(but rhymin' "goin" with "coin"
was pushin' it a bit.
mighta been fun to rhyme it with "groin"...
butt i think you are on top of it!)