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She hated those seats

Posted to Action Poetry

I like the "less is more" found in this poem.

i was a tad bit thrown off though by the first line in S1 "I thought of her"
and then the ref to "Our" in S2.

i read it as she was maybe coming home to you, and you thought of her journey on the plane.

this isn't a jab, it just jarred me a bit.

Excellent poem.