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u r correct

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but i obviously moved in bad noir direction

man, i don't want to be a phony


i should perhaps focus on the zen of jack
and how characterization versus
wooden plot manuevering
is better

i started out with eight simple words and went from there, me being a fucking novice

"warm wind danced his hair across his face"

and judih and you and feral and more implored me to do more and so i tried, untried in my attempt

i went on and on, clueless
except i envisioned a water drowning
my old hometown

man, you are quite perceptive

thanks bill

ahm thinking about a jacksonville readin,
mebbe this fall
during the hurricane season

u game?