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hummmm...

Posted to Haiku Board




i had to ponder
what was the meaning of this~
natural wonder

or

an 'ahha' moment
escapes like a bird in flight
leaving me grounded

Not sure what you are saying...if this is haiku (and maybe it is...i am no judge of haiku) but it offered me no flash of understanding. You could see my post on utterances on the Art of haiku...for my further musings about the form.

SooZen