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thank you

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this is my third possibly forth haiku ever so....

saying? what i was searching for was to compare a mind in its rainy season (sadness) and the Tonel Sap that reverses its flow during the same season...

and i'm thinking now maybe i better write a poem rather then a haiku about this whole river as the mind thing.

simplify for haikus? enlighten
i'll keep trying

thanks