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A few more to riff on, critiques?

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a cloud through the moon
my cat's yawn
squints her eyes



between two moons
the buddha smiles
cricket songs at the lake



crisp breeze
a wave leaves
with her flip-flop



smoking in the rain
grey waves shatter
against the rocks



the arch of her back
outside the window
the waves kiss the sand