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You are quite welcome!

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I'm glad my feedback helped. I look forward to your re-write!

Another bit of advice, don't worry about the syllable count. Most modern, Western haiku are not concerned with that. Check out an on-line haiku mag like The Heron's Nest or some of the samples at Mayfly or Acorn to see what I'm talking about.