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hmmm

Posted to Poetry




Great story, great rhythm.

This works particularly well, I think:
of the victorian
erected on the ruins
of chinatown


This whole piece is a great example of commenting through a story, through characters, showing not telling, not beating the reader over the head with your point. But your point makes it safely across the river nonetheless, and is stronger for how it is done.

Thanks for sharing this :)