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Posted to Poetry

Thank you!

I don't know why that word was so elusive yesterday...AAARRRGGGG!

Do personification and I get along?


But mostly it just seems like, you know, people dressing up their pets in little people clothes!

I still have a problem with the "swollen" line...for some reason I just don't see it...or the waves praying across shores or skylines...I can't see where the waves are, why or how they pray there, how they got just aint connectin'. I'm trying though!