>The moon blesses the earth, and the stars are out to >inspire, but I am inside, in front of the computer.
Some line breaks in this opening would add to the tension in the poem.
>I type "What is the meaning of life"
>Click, Click, Click..
Same here...shorter lines=more tension.
>Then I stop.
Do you need this period?
>And I stare at nothing.
Do you need this second "I"?
>For a second I see my life in its realist form, pointless.
What's it look like? This is a bit too abstract.
>I close my eyes and wish I was dead.
Gotta' pull this off better...telling us what, exactly, you see might help.