live without the ands and ors
maybe instead of they are black just black(see example below) cool imagery sets a mood
The lights are out
crusted with broken spiderwebs
swollen under pale stars
ripe with illuminated memories.
All of them twisted ('maybe just twisted here ?)
through dusk with fog
Waves are not able
to pray across shores or skylines.
Only, here or there, a slow breeze
cold and crisp with its lines
through gray water.