gaga over manna
Posted to Poetry
by JacopoBelbo84 on 2003-11-20 10:21:00
Actually, i liked this...or at least I liked the way you created it, the Capitals in the third part, the repetition of that sinister sentence '"papa's gonna buy/you a looking glass/Smile for the camera, darlin',' in the poem, to tell the truth, it gave be the shivers...
