Tell me where to sign up... Seriously this is a great piece and I love the imagery you are using. If only I had thought of cutting lines in my chest so that my heart could breathe. This poem though made my heart overdose!
I assume this is a poem to your lover? Possibly about a shy person that is so extrodinary and doesn't realize it. Anyway this poem leaves me wondering and I am very happy and content there and that's what I love about good poetry. I like to think after I read a piece. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.