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Been there

Posted to Poetry

hope I don't go back.

I liked the imagery of these lines:

"...wallpaper pulses..."
(reminded me of the LSD scene in Fear and Loathing where the carpet designs start to throb. It makes me nautious just thinking about it and these lines had the same effect. thank you)

"blot out the mirror of water."
(I can see this image as if it just happened yesterday...wait, did it? I don't remember.)

nice poem