this is beautiful
this my friends is reality. It's the sobering drops of life that make this poem live and thrive inside the readers mind. This is a dose of inspiration from the heart of the human soul. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
Why substitute one craving after another. Who you are is all you have. Continue to be yourself and let us have just another moment to enjoy the reality that you know is true.
I look forward to reading more of your work!