10 minute exercise - lines of note
Posted to Poetry
by doreen peri on 2004-02-08 08:06:00
hi majic
good job with this!
this phrasing is beautifully rhythmic... wonderful!
"whispy whips of
white that dot this expanse"
This stanza below is a poem in an of itself. It's lovely!
"I am a brush stroke, a word
and a music note in this painting,
this poem and this symphony that mother nature
performs for her audience"
