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10 minute exercise - lines of note

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hi majic

good job with this!

this phrasing is beautifully rhythmic... wonderful!

"whispy whips of
white that dot this expanse"

This stanza below is a poem in an of itself. It's lovely!

"I am a brush stroke, a word
and a music note in this painting,
this poem and this symphony that mother nature
performs for her audience"