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Soft lessson in balloning

Posted to Poetry

Now is it the absolute abruptness with which
you wish for me to feel your disdain
or is it the sparsness of your approach?
total commitment to your craft requires not only that you play games with your words
but that they also play games with you
I like what you have done
but never would I pander to you by say7ing
i felt it enough
keep it up thogh I see the development of you voice
but never feel like your already there
refine refine refine!
and allow your whirly bird elements of
to bloom devine