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hmm

Posted to Poetry




i really like this, though i have a small suggestion (if i may): i was just getting into this piece when it ended, and i think that if you lengthened the piece by digressing a little on the nature of the "unanswered question", it would satisfy the end of the poem more. the poem left me curious about the unanswered question, and i'm really just hungry for more.