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major emotion

Posted to Poetry

that was conveyed to me by this piece was violence. I felt a sadness and physical pain either inflicted on yourself or someone close to you. The last stanza is incredibly powerful....gave me chills. The second stanza works well with the piece but has a different rhythym. I don't know if that's what you are going for or not. But, your last 4 lines totally brought me back into the poem. Excellent work.