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i was trying to convey a certain rhythm i'm envisioning since these are song lyrics. the previous line is "tear yr world apart"...then "but its all nothing", in other words....i'd tear yr world apart, but it's all nothing and yr no one at all.

Sorry for the confusion. The piece is meant to sort of reflect on my own moments of self-righteous, solipsistic nihilism...don't we all have them?