no, it was originally as is, in prose
but it's got the rhythmic internal rhyme thing going on so i'd call it poetic prose
i never wrote it in lines
as far as line breaks go, my method of line breaks used to be very similar to yours
i think i have been influenced (maybe more than i should be) by LR in many ways in regards to this because his line breaks are sporatic and not in keeping with rhythm that makes standard sense
i've ventured into breaking my lines at different words than i would normally, in order to attempt to create more multiple meanings and flow which doesn't *stop* at the line breaks.... i think this has been influenced by his style
it's hard to explain... but i think i really need to get back to my own voice
thanks for reading, mars... and for the 'gorgeous'