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yes,

Posted to Utterances




I think it's a great one too

it captures a certain melancholy & longing; and I love how the narrator talks about how Horrible seafaring is, yet he cannot resist it.

I'm changing that 4th line to "and grim heart-cares had to endure" because the other way was innacurate



yes,

Posted to Utterances




I think it's a great one too

it captures a certain melancholy & longing; and I love how the narrator talks about how Horrible seafaring is, yet he cannot resist it.

I'm changing that 4th line to "and grim heart-cares had to endure" because the other way was innacurate