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From the perspective of the envious violets,
I intended for the wilting away
to be attributed to the the dandelions, hence the mocking
title Dandy Lions.
I saw that the bitterness of the violets would
cause their own demise. Therefore I left wilting away for the readers' interpretation.

I was unaware of Dandelions as king of plants.
Dandy lions(kings) indeed.

Thank you