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There's a lot of density to this, a lot going on. You have personified winter to some extent. Then there are word plays that use winter, spring and fall all in one place. Some images are concrete (lilacs) and others metaphoric (snow petals). But with all of the density it is somehow unclear what is it that is happening. I mean the deep relation between winter's actions in leaving and what follows in the wake. It seems like winter refuses to fall if the snow springs.