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Hi there...

Posted to Haiku Board




It's scarier here in the wide open world of the boards...

I like knowing you are halfway around the world doing something six hours off from me (probably sleeping -- it's 1:08 AM in Germany right now (I checked).

I can picture your clothesline -- had to be plastic, I suppose, because real rope would absorb the drops... if it weren't haiku I'd ask for some clothespins huddling together in little clumps for warmth and conversation, impeding the central tendencies of those pesky little water beads...

I don't think you need the final line -- the title provides the sagging sense and then you won't be breaking out of the form (God forbid!!)