Wow, that pulled me right in. Coherent, engaging, gave me a smile.
If it’s ok to comment (I hope, heh), here goes.
The title doesn’t do the dialogue justice. Something about “imagined” in there. Maybe cause it had a “real” not imagined feeling. (and I know intrinsically it comes from your imagination.)
I like: “spinning
B-enough to make anyone crazy.”
I don’t like: “the moon is crazy, always has been.”
That’s my only tweak on the text.
Thanks for the read =)