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again your responses are all appreciated. The others below were great. I agree too with this response. The poem, if it can be called that, is quite weak. It is merely a nugget that alludes to what is in the news. I have been trying my hand at such topics but they are difficult. I don't know if more practice would help or if it is inherently part of haiku. After all these are not quite moments.