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I thought I got it

Posted to Haiku Board

but I guess I did not, imagined little puddles of sperm, spring and all that ice cream puddles, there must be more to haiku then just "seeing" I suppose
I like it a lot, I am still thinking about the dog shit on the lawn, in your Heron's nest that I can see but trying to relate looking for the click that brings it home, me following a german sheppard around for twenty four hours waiting for it to shit out some emeralads it swallowed, now if it was an elephant shitting on the lawn i could relate, ashes to ashes dust to dust turds to grass
sorry for the ramble