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My dearest daddy

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rattling inside skull

these hands are not mine

the wheel drives itself

niggling doubts always

critical essay

full-time synopsis

four walls stealing oxygen from soul

twisted roots of ancient trees...

blood pours from branches

rivers and secret salt piles for the soliers

quick getaway with teeth held firmly in mouth

pray pain receives rigor mortis

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...rattling inside skull

these hands are not mine

the wheel drives itself

niggling doubts always

critical essay

full-time synopsis

four walls stealing oxygen from soul

twisted roots of ancient trees...

blood pours from branches

rivers and secret salt piles for the soliers

quick getaway with teeth held firmly in mouth

pray pain receives rigor mortis