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Posted to Poetry
by Mie on 2004-06-29 08:39:00
Excellent use of punctuation, it really emphacized certain phrases and the parantheses set ideas apart in my mind. I also enjoyed the sounds in this piece. Reading it aloud adds alot to this poem.
The voice is very clear in the second and third stanzas. It makes me feel like the first stanza should be a part of another poem, or the second and third should be grouped and added to.
