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16 cans of red stripe later (critic please)

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drinking lager from the fountain of love
Artios falling from the skies up above
an inebreated game - push and shove
get it down boy
get it down boy
Drinking vodka from the tumbler of doom
sat all alone in your blacked out room
if it is so wonderful , how come all you feel is gloom?
get it down girl
get it down girl
16 cans of red stripe later
dont think im gonna be an organ donator
i cant stand up i dont understand why
to see you smile i have to shut one eye
we,re so well matched do you think you,ll give me
a long term lone of you spare kidney
i cant stand up i dont understand why
to see you smile i have to shut one eye