of maidens and songs

by champagne1982

Posted to Poetry on 2004-07-02 11:00:00

Parent message is 672704
I was merely trying to mirror the second stanza with this verse. I know it’s a little antique in language but I chose the terms hoping that they would still transport the reader to that morning meadow. Thanks for the direction to some reading, I’ll take a look.

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