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I wanted it

Posted to Poetry

to have a positive big jack in the box springing open, at the end.
I'd say your response to it is pretty perfect.
Those big jack in the boxes can be surprizing, even disconcerting, but I like them for that reason.
I am complemented that you felt it to be incantation-like.
That's a good thing in my book.
Thank you Beth!