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Posted to Poetry

I think in terms of craft alone some more rhetoric would help the piece, using various tropes to move the message, otherwise it is too much just message and prose or just statement. In terms of the message it seems to me that you are saying that hindsight is better so I got confused. I mean looking back on experience is hindsight, isn't it. Please don't mistake my plain spokenness for rudeness; I'm just getting to the heart of the matter as I see with the best intentions.