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thank you Beth Viera

Posted to Poetry

i think you're right. longer lines would work well here.
I think that it's more my style, as opposed to the particulars of this poem that I'm working with. At one point, all my lines were longer, but generally, they tended to be more full of filler.

I'm more disciplined in my work these days, so lines are shorter...perhaps that's why you gravitate to them as well~~