In Response To Everyone Who Replied
This is not the type of poem I would normally write. It's much to positive. In fact it's probably one of the few poems I have written encompassing any positive feelings toward humanity.
Bennie, I agree the last couplet is gay.
Ellipsis, I like those same lines
Beth, shit, you're right..your critique was very comprehensive, for such a shitty poem.
And lastly, thank you all for your time.
Over and Out