Litkicks Message Board Archive

my small view

Posted to Poetry

You say a lot and you say it with passion. i think that someone with your obvious energy and obvious sensitivity would benefit from scaling down the sweep of their work. you can't sum up the world in one poem/song. try limiting the sweep of each poem/song in order to fully focus on what it is you want to say. we are none of us going to get the whole world down pat in one poem/song. simplify. get concrete. keep with the energy. keep with the passion. keep with the caring.

what do you want to say? what do you really want to say? i mean, really?

one word at a time. breathe. nothing is going anywhere. aaaaaaahhhhhh.