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kerouac (please critique)

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Japhy Ryder what a name. quizzical fellow with mind of pure skies and head full of thought. Alan however was a different creation. more tangible you see. Jack was a crazy a wacky! who cooks steaks on highway-side fire pits anyway???
train cars and cody? and bottles of wine and denver and sanfran. desolation? Ive been there, so very high never a fire lookout though, oh no not I.