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A breath in time (critiqe)

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There has not been a breath in time
To let a willow sway,
And without the breath we drown ourselves
With charater and spice,
And a dark, that reads through all inferno
And the pride thats tips our will,
And without our breath even god cannot be
Which is why the breath is let,
And the character is dulled,
To reach us in the dark, where no willow ever swayed,
And pipe to us a merry laughing will,
And guide each child upon a broadened back.