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One Man's Reality (please critique)

Posted to Poetry




I got lost in the tide
500 years behind
I’d rather ride into the night with you

We old souls thought to hide
In lazy, Summer days
Now, as it chills down
We find ourselves wanting more –

It’s time to stop dreaming,
And start making them REALITY
Fate has already begun
this for us

We must continue
To follow the path
That we found in the blazing sun

(Old souls reunite once again...)