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She Stands (comments are very welcome) by StarryClaire Mar 31, 2001 11:06 AM StarryC by judih Mar 31, 2001 7:46 PM
reply by StarryClaire Mar 31, 2001 8:27 PM
hmmmm, yeah.... by judih Mar 31, 2001 8:29 PM
To J by StarryClaire Mar 31, 2001 8:33 PM
impressionistic details by judih Mar 31, 2001 8:44 PM
hey... by bill_ablin Mar 31, 2001 11:33 PM
who needs coherency? by StarryClaire Apr 1, 2001 11:10 AM
Light Flickers (feedback is always appreciated) by StarryClaire Mar 31, 2001 11:01 AM
Seventh Visit To Bliss by JacobHexx Mar 31, 2001 10:57 AM
Sacred Wound by JacobHexx Mar 31, 2001 10:27 AM
while in paradise by star33 Mar 31, 2001 10:07 AM Mindful... by JacobHexx Mar 31, 2001 10:53 AM
Did you say . . . paradise? by salparadise Mar 31, 2001 1:01 PM
gut renderings by old bull Mar 31, 2001 9:38 AM from star by star33 Mar 31, 2001 9:46 AM
thankyou by old bull Mar 31, 2001 10:07 AM
from star by star33 Mar 31, 2001 10:20 AM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 31, 2001 1:20 PM
"Poem to Gregory Corso" by Anntelope Mar 31, 2001 8:20 AM very cool anecdote by salparadise Mar 31, 2001 1:22 PM
haiku if anyone's listening? by madradiant Mar 31, 2001 6:56 AM from star by star33 Mar 31, 2001 9:31 AM
I am listening, and have heard... by JacobHexx Mar 31, 2001 10:41 AM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 31, 2001 1:06 PM
for madradiant by sparklejames Mar 31, 2001 3:44 PM
thank you all by madradiant Mar 31, 2001 4:17 PM
your haiku moves mountains like slow rain by Ishmael Mar 31, 2001 10:12 PM
critique welcome by mindlosing Mar 31, 2001 5:07 AM mindlostandshowering by cylance Mar 31, 2001 5:33 AM
from star by star33 Mar 31, 2001 9:35 AM
may your mood continue... by madradiant Mar 31, 2001 4:44 PM
does this make sense. and do you like it. and what could change. by punching holes Mar 30, 2001 10:43 PM a special trick by punching holes Mar 30, 2001 10:48 PM
hello julie by judih Mar 30, 2001 11:58 PM
no to re-writes.... by madradiant Mar 31, 2001 4:39 PM
but by punching holes Mar 31, 2001 10:35 PM
ohyegods!!! by cylance Mar 30, 2001 9:56 PM hey there cy by judih Mar 30, 2001 10:00 PM
snorkeling by cylance Mar 31, 2001 1:31 AM
even the stingray by judih Mar 31, 2001 2:01 AM
i feel a by cylance Mar 31, 2001 2:32 AM
dolphins and whales by judih Mar 31, 2001 3:17 AM
we who tour by cylance Mar 31, 2001 4:13 AM
soul sighed spirit wide by judih Mar 31, 2001 6:04 AM
on and on by cylance Mar 31, 2001 6:31 AM
laundromat ponder rings by judih Mar 31, 2001 8:32 AM
Summer Ballade (hey, please critique...this is one of my 1st tries at spontaneous prose/poem) by Severein Mar 30, 2001 9:20 PM spontaneous by judih Mar 30, 2001 9:31 PM
(8^o)* by Cain Mar 30, 2001 9:42 PM
none by RYAN Mar 31, 2001 4:09 PM
poem b4 i go by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 9:11 PM gong echoes by judih Mar 30, 2001 9:19 PM
THIS PLACE IS BETTER THAN THERAPY and drugs by old bull Mar 30, 2001 8:27 PM (8^o)* by Cain Mar 30, 2001 8:30 PM
this is star by star33 Mar 30, 2001 8:33 PM
de ja vu by old bull Mar 30, 2001 8:35 PM
de ja vu by old bull Mar 30, 2001 8:35 PM
LitKicks energy . . . by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 8:36 PM
starisshining by star33 Mar 30, 2001 8:39 PM
go man go by old bull Mar 30, 2001 8:41 PM
i live in free embrace by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 8:48 PM
Yeah! by ConcreteSphinx Mar 30, 2001 8:58 PM
when my boy sal hits he delights my poet.. by sparklejames Mar 31, 2001 1:38 PM
no genius here by salparadise Mar 31, 2001 1:53 PM
addictive by SeraRojas Mar 30, 2001 9:08 PM
yes by star33 Mar 30, 2001 9:13 PM
yes, yes, yes by madradiant Mar 31, 2001 4:21 PM
american koan #71 by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 8:21 PM no words. by Cain Mar 30, 2001 8:36 PM
3am rambling story by lotusgrl Mar 30, 2001 8:19 PM from star by star33 Mar 30, 2001 8:30 PM
sex by candlelight by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 8:11 PM i can feel it... by star33 Mar 30, 2001 8:22 PM
no coincidences . . . . by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 8:28 PM
flowing... by star33 Mar 30, 2001 8:37 PM
keep touching by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 8:42 PM
star...says by star33 Mar 30, 2001 8:49 PM
i feel that by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 8:59 PM
reading this by cylance Mar 31, 2001 4:27 AM
full moon over the alamo by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 7:52 PM fromstar by star33 Mar 30, 2001 7:59 PM
yeah yeah by mindlosing Mar 30, 2001 8:02 PM
starting petition by judih Mar 30, 2001 8:07 PM
ain't got time to wonder why . . . by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 8:13 PM
got a few ideas by judih Mar 30, 2001 8:25 PM
you knew i'd be first by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 8:30 PM
sixties muse sick will get ewe know wear by judih Mar 30, 2001 8:37 PM
the journey of . . . by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 8:45 PM
when you put it that way by judih Mar 30, 2001 8:49 PM
i'm here... by star33 Mar 30, 2001 8:58 PM
all live by judih Mar 30, 2001 9:04 PM
from star to everyone by star33 Mar 30, 2001 9:12 PM
come 2 me baby by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 9:17 PM
id like to introduce myself by old bull Mar 30, 2001 8:46 PM
vial well scraped, spoon licked clean by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 7:48 PM from sera by SeraRojas Mar 30, 2001 7:55 PM
yup by Cain Mar 30, 2001 7:57 PM
White Boy:that first time by SeraRojas Mar 30, 2001 7:40 PM omigod! omigod! by Cain Mar 30, 2001 7:44 PM
hehe by SeraRojas Mar 30, 2001 7:49 PM
(8^o)* by Cain Mar 30, 2001 7:53 PM
a little dance? by SeraRojas Mar 30, 2001 7:57 PM
really. by Cain Mar 30, 2001 8:15 PM
hey cain by SeraRojas Mar 30, 2001 8:24 PM
hmmm by Cain Mar 30, 2001 8:26 PM
none by RYAN Mar 31, 2001 4:24 PM
ryan by SeraRojas Mar 31, 2001 8:10 PM
critique please by mindlosing Mar 30, 2001 7:32 PM like... by star33 Mar 30, 2001 7:47 PM
like... by star33 Mar 30, 2001 7:47 PM
i dig it by old bull Mar 30, 2001 7:48 PM
humm by mindlosing Mar 30, 2001 7:57 PM
dream by star33 Mar 30, 2001 8:01 PM
be yourself in life by old bull Mar 30, 2001 8:12 PM
dear mindlosing dk by judih Mar 31, 2001 12:23 AM
very inspirational by Innocent&Impressionable Mar 30, 2001 9:58 PM
critique por favor by Cain Mar 30, 2001 6:17 PM perfect by star33 Mar 30, 2001 6:21 PM
reminded by mindlosing Mar 30, 2001 6:52 PM
oh.... by Cain Mar 30, 2001 6:55 PM
Not what i thought by mindlosing Mar 30, 2001 7:12 PM
yeah by Cain Mar 30, 2001 7:16 PM
Well Ok by mindlosing Mar 30, 2001 7:28 PM
damn! by Cain Mar 30, 2001 7:33 PM
Thanks by mindlosing Mar 30, 2001 7:40 PM
(8^o)* by Cain Mar 30, 2001 7:42 PM
re: Cain's truth by star33 Mar 30, 2001 7:45 PM
si by Cain Mar 30, 2001 7:52 PM
Funny by mindlosing Mar 30, 2001 7:46 PM
nope by Cain Mar 30, 2001 7:51 PM
hhmmm... by star33 Mar 30, 2001 7:52 PM
you got it by mindlosing Mar 30, 2001 8:00 PM
i love this place by old bull Mar 30, 2001 8:04 PM
super-rad by Cain Mar 30, 2001 8:17 PM
star says yes by star33 Mar 30, 2001 8:24 PM
(8^o)* by Cain Mar 30, 2001 8:33 PM
RE: mushy feels good by star33 Mar 30, 2001 8:20 PM
we've been expecting you by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 8:24 PM
untitled (please critique) by star33 Mar 30, 2001 5:48 PM jeepers. by Cain Mar 30, 2001 6:48 PM
yeah... by star33 Mar 30, 2001 7:00 PM
throbbing by Cain Mar 30, 2001 7:04 PM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 7:11 PM
Dawn (for sera) by star33 Mar 30, 2001 5:32 PM to dawn with love by SeraRojas Mar 30, 2001 5:40 PM
so glad you liked it! by star33 Mar 30, 2001 5:55 PM
sorry to invade... by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 6:27 PM
compassion by star33 Mar 30, 2001 6:38 PM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 7:13 PM
rejuvenation by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 4:38 PM responsebystar by star33 Mar 30, 2001 4:42 PM
(8^o)* by Cain Mar 30, 2001 6:28 PM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 7:19 PM
good idea sal! by madradiant Mar 31, 2001 7:07 AM
Beauty by RYAN Mar 31, 2001 4:32 PM
NEAL C critique please by old bull Mar 30, 2001 2:10 PM nice by star33 Mar 30, 2001 2:25 PM
trymybest by cylance Mar 30, 2001 2:29 PM
maybe... by star33 Mar 30, 2001 2:48 PM
bless you joan anderson by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 5:01 PM
thanks by old bull Mar 30, 2001 5:55 PM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 8:53 PM
hornyhonkinghiawathas by cylance Mar 30, 2001 2:03 PM yesss....... by star33 Mar 30, 2001 2:08 PM
star again by star33 Mar 30, 2001 4:25 PM
2star33 by cylance Mar 31, 2001 5:22 AM
i see... by star33 Mar 31, 2001 9:52 AM
some real human loving by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 4:53 PM
joy... by star33 Mar 30, 2001 5:03 PM
i'm relating... by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 5:11 PM
thank you* by star33 Mar 30, 2001 5:16 PM
yes i follow by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 5:55 PM
flow on... by star33 Mar 30, 2001 6:01 PM
alas... by star33 Mar 30, 2001 6:16 PM
willing but not willing... by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 6:22 PM
sorry by star33 Mar 30, 2001 6:30 PM
oh yeah. by Cain Mar 30, 2001 6:24 PM
i'd have by cylance Mar 31, 2001 5:25 AM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 7:16 PM
first haikus please critique by mindlosing Mar 30, 2001 1:36 PM Re: haiku by star33 Mar 30, 2001 2:20 PM
Yes! by mindlosing Mar 30, 2001 2:27 PM
Re:Yes by star33 Mar 30, 2001 2:51 PM
haiku dilemmas by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 4:48 PM
How about this one any better? by mindlosing Mar 30, 2001 5:13 PM
its definetive.. by star33 Mar 30, 2001 5:18 PM
thankyouthankyouthankyou by mindlosing Mar 30, 2001 5:20 PM
addictive by mindlosing Mar 30, 2001 5:26 PM
yeh i'm locked in too by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 6:00 PM
Belly of a Shattered Moon (please, please critique these...i'd appreciate it greatly) by Severein Mar 30, 2001 1:04 PM verry good by old bull Mar 30, 2001 1:18 PM
******** by star33 Mar 30, 2001 2:28 PM
Adele by SeraRojas Mar 30, 2001 11:28 AM sad by star33 Mar 30, 2001 2:31 PM
hello star by SeraRojas Mar 30, 2001 2:43 PM
curious question by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 5:07 PM
Good Question by SeraRojas Mar 30, 2001 5:24 PM
american koan #68 by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 11:21 AM
Runaway Forest by ConcreteSphinx Mar 30, 2001 9:46 AM riddim by Melek-taus Mar 30, 2001 11:51 AM
Cactus Blindess by ConcreteSphinx Mar 30, 2001 9:37 AM
two more little haiku offerings by madradiant Mar 30, 2001 7:44 AM
boulder mountain canyon echo by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 7:31 AM yr mountain air is good for me by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 4:36 PM
what a coincidence by Cain Mar 30, 2001 7:14 PM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 7:22 PM
etc. by Cain Mar 30, 2001 7:27 PM
longer than five years ago by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 8:17 PM
maybe by Cain Mar 30, 2001 8:24 PM
hmmm by Cain Mar 30, 2001 8:25 PM
just passing thru by salparadise Mar 31, 2001 1:32 PM
West of Western by SeraRojas Mar 30, 2001 6:45 AM
cute little poems-please critique by RYAN Mar 30, 2001 5:48 AM everything is good by SeraRojas Mar 30, 2001 6:09 AM
someone still feels the sunlight by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 4:30 PM
it's warm too.... by star33 Mar 30, 2001 4:40 PM
CUTE! by RYAN Mar 31, 2001 10:37 AM
wonderful! by shan117 Mar 31, 2001 10:41 AM
Dopesick Morning (Mourning?) by SeraRojas Mar 30, 2001 5:06 AM here you go again by Atlashrug65 Mar 30, 2001 6:10 PM
in danger of getting boo-ed off the stage.... by judih Mar 30, 2001 1:54 AM beat seriousness by cylance Mar 30, 2001 3:18 AM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 6:53 AM
agreed by madradiant Mar 30, 2001 7:21 AM
Conforming to form by ConcreteSphinx Mar 30, 2001 9:44 AM
in danger of getting bones on the dancefloor by Melek-taus Mar 30, 2001 12:24 PM
critique please by old bull Mar 29, 2001 9:15 PM i love it! by distorted perfection Mar 29, 2001 11:51 PM
thanks very much by old bull Mar 30, 2001 10:48 AM
"NEAL C" I NEED HELP WITH STRUCTURE by old bull Mar 30, 2001 12:21 PM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 8:56 PM
rapstyle and committed to memory. by punching holes Mar 29, 2001 8:52 PM none by RYAN Mar 30, 2001 5:59 AM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 6:57 AM
Reply to this message: by ConcreteSphinx Mar 30, 2001 9:40 AM
writing on the wall by Melek-taus Mar 30, 2001 12:11 PM
not rapt... by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 4:22 PM
self-critique by punching holes Mar 30, 2001 10:22 PM
worked for me by mindlosing Mar 30, 2001 5:19 PM
eh by bill_ablin Mar 29, 2001 4:35 PM truth is beauty is love by cylance Mar 29, 2001 4:44 PM
still a haiku boy... please critique by sparklejames Mar 29, 2001 4:16 PM reply. by ivanV Mar 29, 2001 4:26 PM
haiku for my favorite drug- please critique by earthlyprincess Mar 29, 2001 4:10 PM there's a heat to be found... by sparklejames Mar 29, 2001 4:20 PM
i haiku u by cylance Mar 29, 2001 4:40 PM
nectar by Melek-taus Mar 29, 2001 5:31 PM
no postage necessary....... by Uncle B Mar 29, 2001 10:13 PM
drugs are good for us by judih Mar 30, 2001 12:29 AM
haiku fer **my ** favorite drug by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 7:40 AM
sunlight dazz sells by judih Mar 30, 2001 7:52 AM
& i do . . . . by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 8:09 AM
spanish castle magic by judih Mar 30, 2001 8:25 AM
judih dances, sal just drools... by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 4:14 PM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 30, 2001 7:24 PM
more drugs by SeraRojas Mar 30, 2001 12:06 PM
drugsssssss by SeraRojas Mar 30, 2001 12:05 PM
slow-motion by cylance Mar 29, 2001 3:31 PM
AeroStar by tomcat Mar 29, 2001 1:28 PM YEAhhhhhhh by judih Mar 30, 2001 12:26 AM
cartwheeling in nova scotia by salparadise Mar 29, 2001 1:25 PM cheyenne by cylance Mar 29, 2001 3:47 PM
stand on yr head cy by judih Mar 30, 2001 12:21 AM
back to fracture... please critique... by sparklejames Mar 29, 2001 1:21 PM postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 29, 2001 1:54 PM
the truth by cylance Mar 29, 2001 3:53 PM
the alchemy of dream by Melek-taus Mar 29, 2001 5:24 PM
wow by firstborn Mar 29, 2001 7:53 PM
idea for fun? by punching holes Mar 29, 2001 8:36 PM
punctuation is a disease by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 4:06 PM
yep by star33 Mar 30, 2001 4:36 PM
rock. by punching holes Mar 30, 2001 10:15 PM
some necessary warmth - critique welcome by sparklejames Mar 29, 2001 1:19 PM mmmmm..... by star33 Mar 30, 2001 4:46 PM
destorted lonliness by distorted perfection Mar 29, 2001 12:57 PM critiques welcome! by distorted perfection Mar 29, 2001 11:34 PM
his name in sulphurous skies by salparadise Mar 29, 2001 12:51 PM i read by cylance Mar 29, 2001 4:06 PM
still a little bleak today... by sparklejames Mar 29, 2001 12:34 PM what ist his about? by distorted perfection Mar 29, 2001 11:41 PM
preoccupied... by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 3:57 PM
from star by star33 Mar 30, 2001 4:49 PM
thankyou * by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 6:05 PM
deselate lonliness by distorted perfection Mar 29, 2001 12:29 PM
EIP by Darren Mar 29, 2001 11:44 AM
Almost Over Now (to the White Boy) by SeraRojas Mar 29, 2001 10:24 AM victory over the visceral by Melek-taus Mar 29, 2001 5:51 PM
it never really ends by SeraRojas Mar 29, 2001 7:22 PM
hey by Atlashrug65 Mar 29, 2001 7:51 PM
you have captured the truth by distorted perfection Mar 29, 2001 11:46 PM
lovers embrace by distorted perfection Mar 29, 2001 3:32 AM
thursday haikus by madradiant Mar 29, 2001 2:18 AM
a haiku to carry on the new trend... critique if you care to by madradiant Mar 29, 2001 2:02 AM postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 29, 2001 9:37 AM
anonymously I tremble at my animistic tendancies (crit it if you finish it) by Melek-taus Mar 29, 2001 12:15 AM
Desperation by ttsetan Mar 28, 2001 11:04 PM
More ramblings- tell me what you think if you want by mindlosing Mar 28, 2001 7:47 PM distance can be crystallized by Melek-taus Mar 29, 2001 6:08 PM
thanks by mindlosing Mar 30, 2001 1:57 PM
from novel? to prose to poetry to haiku? to word to letter to etc by Melek-taus Mar 30, 2001 9:44 PM
A Picture Frame Epiphany by StarryClaire Mar 28, 2001 7:40 PM fully framed by Melek-taus Mar 28, 2001 9:57 PM
basil e. frankweiler by punching holes Mar 29, 2001 8:42 PM
darker haikus... by sparklejames Mar 28, 2001 6:50 PM sparkle james, you are new to this culture!love them. by distorted perfection Mar 29, 2001 12:19 PM
AlienFlower Haiku Workshop by Janan Mar 28, 2001 5:43 PM a fierce haiku convert replies... by sparklejames Mar 28, 2001 6:08 PM
partial symphonic, hopefully perfectly aligned now! by sparklejames Mar 28, 2001 5:28 PM hooray that's what it's supposed to look like! by sparklejames Mar 28, 2001 5:34 PM
things by punching holes Mar 29, 2001 8:24 PM
can't give up the softness... by sparklejames Mar 30, 2001 3:47 PM
Tricks Slip Quick critique away but its not a haiku by SeraRojas Mar 28, 2001 2:57 PM dark and lovely by Atlashrug65 Mar 28, 2001 7:42 PM
WOW! by RYAN Mar 29, 2001 6:13 AM
from sera by SeraRojas Mar 29, 2001 11:19 AM
haiku? by mindlosing Mar 28, 2001 2:12 PM
matamoros constellation pinata mantra by salparadise Mar 28, 2001 12:28 PM appreciative of some humanity... by sparklejames Mar 28, 2001 5:59 PM
check out by cylance Mar 29, 2001 4:31 PM
snake eats spider critique please by old bull Mar 28, 2001 11:06 AM
teetering, bowlegged leaning by salparadise Mar 28, 2001 3:38 AM ah eddie by judih Mar 28, 2001 6:40 AM
The Shore (please critique) by Cassady Mar 27, 2001 10:52 PM postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 28, 2001 11:39 AM
that delicate bit by SeraRojas Mar 29, 2001 10:02 AM
here's a poem--critique away by firstborn Mar 27, 2001 8:00 PM maybe I want to by Hero Mar 27, 2001 8:05 PM
If you can find the time... by Hero Mar 27, 2001 7:52 PM Thank you to whoever ever reads this by Hero Mar 27, 2001 7:57 PM
hey there hero by judih Mar 28, 2001 6:56 AM
Fallen Hero by Hero Mar 27, 2001 7:21 PM dig it by SeraRojas Mar 27, 2001 7:52 PM
sleep deprivation as a means for clearer(but still unusually fogged) thinking? by ConcreteSphinx Mar 27, 2001 7:08 PM change of perception by SeraRojas Mar 27, 2001 7:24 PM
sleepy by Hero Mar 27, 2001 7:33 PM
drugs by mindlosing Mar 27, 2001 7:44 PM
hmmm... by firstborn Mar 27, 2001 7:49 PM
HA by mindlosing Mar 27, 2001 7:54 PM
eh kay by grady Mar 28, 2001 10:35 PM
the thick veil of consciousness by Melek-taus Mar 28, 2001 10:43 PM
anecdote ...yep another dope story by SeraRojas Mar 27, 2001 7:03 PM
matyr, moron or madwoman—or all of the above by locks_herself_out Mar 27, 2001 5:47 PM plasticpastelpinkPERFECT by cylance Mar 28, 2001 12:21 AM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 28, 2001 3:28 AM
No purpose by mindlosing Mar 27, 2001 4:39 PM love this direct pure writer... by sparklejames Mar 27, 2001 4:59 PM
Untainted thought by mindlosing Mar 27, 2001 5:21 PM
yr purity of flow is a gift to nurture... by sparklejames Mar 27, 2001 5:35 PM
... by mindlosing Mar 27, 2001 5:52 PM
my writing is my identity by sparklejames Mar 28, 2001 6:26 PM
love it-- by firstborn Mar 27, 2001 7:54 PM
none needed by Melek-taus Mar 28, 2001 11:33 PM
5 little unrelated babies by madradiant Mar 27, 2001 4:31 PM haiku hits keep coming... by sparklejames Mar 27, 2001 5:06 PM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 28, 2001 3:25 AM
wow i'm pleased by madradiant Mar 28, 2001 1:32 PM
Reply to 5 little unrelated babies. by silke Mar 29, 2001 1:22 PM
partial symphonic (experimental?-let me know...) by sparklejames Mar 27, 2001 3:48 PM aargh! that didn't come out right!!! by sparklejames Mar 27, 2001 3:54 PM
let's see if this worked. by punching holes Mar 27, 2001 8:34 PM
well, it almost worked. by punching holes Mar 27, 2001 8:40 PM
spaced out by cylance Mar 28, 2001 12:15 AM
five (unrelated?) haikus, please comment... by sparklejames Mar 27, 2001 2:50 PM
is anyone else this haunted by the white truth beam watcher? by sparklejames Mar 27, 2001 2:21 PM
moon obsession, is this unhealthy? (critique welcome) by sparklejames Mar 27, 2001 2:17 PM More, more by mindlosing Mar 27, 2001 6:21 PM
the corpulent lizard eye twitching as it fixes on prey by Melek-taus Mar 28, 2001 11:27 PM
Links by Jordi Ll. C. Mar 27, 2001 1:56 PM
A Pure Thing: More Stories by SeraRojas Mar 27, 2001 1:31 PM
haiku............critique if you want..... by Uncle B Mar 27, 2001 11:34 AM
haiku addictions... by sparklejames Mar 27, 2001 11:13 AM just by cylance Mar 27, 2001 1:18 PM
addicted to... by madradiant Mar 27, 2001 1:51 PM
20th Century America (my first contribution) by ConcreteSphinx Mar 27, 2001 10:33 AM welcome by cylance Mar 27, 2001 1:04 PM
black ice by SeraRojas Mar 27, 2001 8:22 AM sera sera sera by Atlashrug65 Mar 28, 2001 7:58 PM
my first contribution... a haiku of course! by madradiant Mar 27, 2001 7:15 AM poetic in language... by sparklejames Mar 27, 2001 11:18 AM
haiku comparisons by sparklejames Mar 27, 2001 11:19 AM
acrobats in catapult twist no net beneath by salparadise Mar 27, 2001 6:39 AM message from SERA by SeraRojas Mar 27, 2001 5:10 PM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 28, 2001 3:17 AM
message from SERA by SeraRojas Mar 27, 2001 5:11 PM
think yr being hasty... by sparklejames Mar 27, 2001 5:23 PM
oh yeah?!! by SeraRojas Mar 27, 2001 8:39 PM
never heard of it, but then again by judih Mar 28, 2001 6:48 AM
oh yeah?!! by SeraRojas Mar 27, 2001 8:40 PM
and the moral of the story is... by sparklejames Mar 27, 2001 5:15 PM
like the droning ring of faraway church bells by salparadise Mar 27, 2001 6:34 AM warm and earthy by madradiant Mar 27, 2001 7:18 AM
pressing question by punching holes Mar 27, 2001 12:38 PM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 28, 2001 3:20 AM
incredible by cylance Mar 27, 2001 1:13 PM
reply by salparadise Mar 28, 2001 3:21 AM
A jokes a joke but there comes a time for nirvana won oh won by judih Mar 27, 2001 3:28 AM nirvana banana bandana by salparadise Mar 27, 2001 3:35 AM
baby butterfly by cylance Mar 26, 2001 11:41 PM
telluride in december (please critique if so moved) by Cassady Mar 26, 2001 9:50 PM godaramalamadingdong by salparadise Mar 27, 2001 3:28 AM
my first poemsomething around here. critique away. by punching holes Mar 26, 2001 8:09 PM postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 27, 2001 3:38 AM
Trapped by mindlosing Mar 26, 2001 7:25 PM
Super Glue by mindlosing Mar 26, 2001 7:18 PM random by punching holes Mar 26, 2001 8:02 PM
Citibank Teller by Cassady Mar 26, 2001 6:23 PM Citibank Teller by SeraRojas Mar 26, 2001 6:26 PM
just another reply. by locks_herself_out Mar 27, 2001 5:54 PM
for my gone boy, take a deep breath now (please critique...) by sparklejames Mar 26, 2001 6:20 PM nice... by wend Mar 26, 2001 7:35 PM
response to critiques... by sparklejames Mar 27, 2001 2:36 PM
beautiful by SeraRojas Mar 26, 2001 7:53 PM
teeth of packed snow surrounding a tounge of flame by Melek-taus Mar 27, 2001 2:21 AM
Dirty South by SeraRojas Mar 26, 2001 6:19 PM FIOROCET to the resuce by Melek-taus Mar 27, 2001 12:39 AM
haiku's are my favourite for now... by sparklejames Mar 26, 2001 6:02 PM morning dew... by Cassady Mar 26, 2001 6:09 PM
holy contours... by sparklejames Mar 26, 2001 6:13 PM
West Of Western feel free to critique by SeraRojas Mar 26, 2001 6:00 PM More west... by Cassady Mar 26, 2001 6:07 PM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 27, 2001 3:45 AM
Nightmares by Atlashrug65 Mar 29, 2001 9:35 AM
Lime Light (or thank you timothy leary) by Cassady Mar 26, 2001 6:00 PM
Peoria Haiku by kkizer Mar 26, 2001 5:53 PM hey, some haikus i like!! by sparklejames Mar 26, 2001 5:57 PM
three move haiku poem, anticipating loss... by sparklejames Mar 26, 2001 5:45 PM will this be the start. of actual critiques. and not just empty compliments. by punching holes Mar 26, 2001 8:19 PM
stoic stores of solitude intrude at this interlude by Melek-taus Mar 27, 2001 1:38 AM
Whats Comin' by Cassady Mar 26, 2001 5:36 PM i like it neal... by sparklejames Mar 26, 2001 5:42 PM
critiquing makes me unsure of myself. by punching holes Mar 26, 2001 8:28 PM
help on the way by Cassady Mar 26, 2001 9:46 PM
my first haiku by brooklyn Mar 26, 2001 5:12 PM A little haiku background by kkizer Mar 26, 2001 5:44 PM
in agreement... by sparklejames Mar 26, 2001 5:51 PM
back in the ground by Melek-taus Mar 27, 2001 12:47 AM
agreed by brooklyn Mar 27, 2001 8:48 AM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 27, 2001 3:47 AM
Waiting for the final hit (excerpt from) by SeraRojas Mar 26, 2001 4:58 PM the shit down here by Melek-taus Mar 27, 2001 1:17 AM
dig it by Hero Mar 27, 2001 7:04 PM
read more then..hero..i could post my whole life on here, baby by SeraRojas Mar 27, 2001 7:08 PM
scrap by cylance Mar 26, 2001 1:56 PM Yes! by Think4Yourself Mar 26, 2001 4:27 PM
august allegories alight around the light by Melek-taus Mar 27, 2001 1:24 AM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 27, 2001 3:42 AM
honoured by cylance Mar 27, 2001 12:44 PM
can no one ignite this fire for the delight and desire of creation? by Melek-taus Mar 26, 2001 9:15 AM
Says a me . . . (Istanbul is killing me...critique if you can) by judih Mar 26, 2001 4:23 AM constantinople calling by salparadise Mar 26, 2001 7:29 AM
sounds slightly entrancing yet oddly harrowing by Melek-taus Mar 26, 2001 8:29 AM
good questions, M-t by judih Mar 26, 2001 11:14 AM
open sesame by cylance Mar 26, 2001 1:34 PM
The dancers by StarryClaire Mar 25, 2001 1:56 PM
everything you wish for in a constant meteoric haze by salparadise Mar 25, 2001 10:05 AM Yer imagery by kkizer Mar 25, 2001 12:45 PM
could be offensive to some( but please critique) by Shagz Mar 25, 2001 6:45 AM huhmm... by saint Mar 25, 2001 1:13 PM
verse is incapable of offending by Melek-taus Mar 26, 2001 8:42 AM
american koan #1 by salparadise Mar 25, 2001 4:08 AM no way out by SeraRojas Mar 27, 2001 6:14 AM
a churlish whirlwind bends your head back opens your mouth wide and lets the thunder clapCOMMENTS? by Melek-taus Mar 24, 2001 4:26 PM . , ? ! by saint Mar 25, 2001 1:30 PM
Are you a meteorologist? by Melek-taus Mar 26, 2001 8:16 AM
hush the spirit by frostbite119 Mar 24, 2001 3:46 PM neither imposing nor implacable at any hour of the day by Melek-taus Mar 25, 2001 12:05 AM
sometimes i wake suddenly to see tiny threads... by sparklejames Mar 24, 2001 2:32 PM how come you've sent your lunar ticks to rip out my eyes by Melek-taus Mar 24, 2001 4:45 PM
haiku, please critique... by sparklejames Mar 24, 2001 2:27 PM takes me to dry by judih Mar 25, 2001 7:35 PM
christmas eve highway blues by kkizer Mar 24, 2001 10:50 AM
dilemma by kkizer Mar 24, 2001 10:46 AM solution for dilemma? by sparklejames Mar 24, 2001 2:47 PM
antistrating the murdenfilic shalcustrammes by Melek-taus Mar 25, 2001 12:37 AM
Random thoughts while traveling through northern michigan by kkizer Mar 24, 2001 10:41 AM
caffeine kicks by Qlex Mar 24, 2001 10:12 AM no it doesn't. it claws by Melek-taus Mar 25, 2001 12:43 AM
Unique Internal Confict that is Universal by saxrust Mar 24, 2001 8:22 AM god the clod by Melek-taus Mar 25, 2001 12:24 AM
on a Daily basis by JaneeHuber Mar 24, 2001 7:08 AM
train by accesstime Mar 24, 2001 5:06 AM Subway knows news = good news by judih Mar 24, 2001 5:51 AM
blue eyes of the fascination unspoken by salparadise Mar 24, 2001 4:39 AM
helios mythology of the burning wire by salparadise Mar 24, 2001 4:37 AM let the embers curdle by Melek-taus Mar 27, 2001 1:54 AM
incandescent machinations of the glittering heart by salparadise Mar 24, 2001 4:36 AM cough bleat chatter squeak by Melek-taus Mar 27, 2001 1:00 AM
pinball by toefungusjoe78 Mar 23, 2001 11:45 PM
five move warm haiku poem by sparklejames Mar 23, 2001 2:12 PM Reply by StarryClaire Mar 23, 2001 8:48 PM
rebuttal to the reply. by punching holes Mar 24, 2001 11:18 PM
Rebuttal to the Rebuttal by StarryClaire Mar 25, 2001 2:03 PM
agreeing with rebuttal... by madradiant Mar 25, 2001 3:19 PM
i feel a little misunderstood. by punching holes Mar 25, 2001 6:50 PM
POETRY IS HUMANITY..... by sparklejames Mar 26, 2001 5:34 PM
Reply by madradiant Mar 24, 2001 3:58 AM
maybe i should reinvent my palette by sparklejames Mar 23, 2001 1:53 PM The Trinity by ecstatic Mar 23, 2001 3:40 PM
destructive pioneers of the last habitable frontier readdressing progress as a means for inactivit by Melek-taus Mar 23, 2001 11:25 PM
Reply by madradiant Mar 24, 2001 4:02 AM
Cambodian Folklore by makoocraig Mar 23, 2001 12:40 PM
Taliban Ozimandias by melford12 Mar 23, 2001 12:07 PM
t.u.g.b.o.a.t. digital recovery by ecstatic Mar 23, 2001 9:27 AM
credit my indifference by danisha_sparks Mar 23, 2001 5:40 AM
Concentrating on the concentric lines by StarryClaire Mar 22, 2001 8:03 PM might notice a burning cigarette, though by judih Mar 23, 2001 2:36 AM
american koan #91 by salparadise Mar 22, 2001 7:58 PM bring on the koans! by ecstatic Mar 23, 2001 9:48 AM
tear-stained wind chime jitters by salparadise Mar 22, 2001 7:56 PM Paper cup en garde by judih Mar 23, 2001 2:23 AM
Keep 'em company by kkizer Mar 22, 2001 5:54 PM
Her blue flash by me by kkizer Mar 22, 2001 5:51 PM cat by trickbaby Mar 23, 2001 7:55 AM
meow by ecstatic Mar 23, 2001 10:17 AM
Happy monster eyes of midnight buddha thursday by kkizer Mar 22, 2001 5:38 PM postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 22, 2001 7:51 PM
poemcard from sal by salparadise Mar 23, 2001 10:55 AM
holy peoria by kkizer Mar 24, 2001 10:38 AM
Fine Tuned by makoocraig Mar 22, 2001 4:09 PM
Hi Way Won by makoocraig Mar 22, 2001 3:55 PM Reminds me... by kkizer Mar 22, 2001 5:25 PM
Often by makoocraig Mar 23, 2001 8:57 AM
A Term of Endearment by saxrust Mar 22, 2001 7:25 AM
Bus Stay Shunned Dude by judih Mar 22, 2001 6:23 AM postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 22, 2001 7:53 PM
imbedded in a nosegay the song longs to reload his throat.... by Melek-taus Mar 21, 2001 11:22 PM
i just sat down to write...attempting to make each paragraph a seperate thought by ivanV Mar 21, 2001 10:17 PM
car, seated, spirits by ecstatic Mar 21, 2001 10:01 PM postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 22, 2001 8:26 PM
The path of wasteland by StarryClaire Mar 21, 2001 8:09 PM
stream of consciousness by flipflop Mar 21, 2001 10:21 AM props by Billectric Mar 21, 2001 1:18 PM
I say I don't remember by flipflop Mar 21, 2001 10:01 AM
daisy daze by flipflop Mar 21, 2001 9:52 AM
ramble on by derelictmindset Mar 21, 2001 1:47 AM
Last Summer (corny!) by osram Mar 20, 2001 12:49 PM
why cues? by judih Mar 20, 2001 10:36 AM I don't know... by cylance Mar 20, 2001 1:20 PM
sigh burrr squeeze by judih Mar 20, 2001 8:36 PM
do I by makoocraig Mar 23, 2001 9:21 PM
american koan #32 by salparadise Mar 20, 2001 8:47 AM Nice post by kkizer Mar 21, 2001 10:54 AM
elephant by cylance Mar 20, 2001 2:28 AM
the sweet chrysanthemum incantations by salparadise Mar 19, 2001 7:31 PM I hear the words by cylance Mar 20, 2001 2:41 AM
Everyday she stops by StarryClaire Mar 19, 2001 7:24 PM
Two faces (a dedication to C) by StarryClaire Mar 19, 2001 7:20 PM a rose no prose by cylance Mar 20, 2001 3:17 AM
a story of things- comment? by Radka Mar 19, 2001 4:11 PM ($1.99 for 3, wow!) by ecstatic Mar 21, 2001 11:14 PM
american koan #80 by salparadise Mar 19, 2001 12:22 PM
Just Beach Calamity by Bobo Mar 17, 2001 7:13 PM i feel it by Billectric Mar 18, 2001 9:13 AM
Two (Please critique...i wrote this using Burroughs-Gysin cut-up method using short phrases&words) by Severein Mar 17, 2001 2:29 PM
Mythology of a Monochrome Dream (PLEASE, PLEASE read and critique) by Severein Mar 17, 2001 2:25 PM j has read and re-read by judih Mar 17, 2001 7:59 PM
and I cy by cylance Mar 18, 2001 1:16 PM
petals by cylance Mar 17, 2001 12:57 PM postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 17, 2001 6:30 PM
reply by StarryClaire Mar 18, 2001 7:23 PM
naked music chimes & wind enchanted by salparadise Mar 16, 2001 2:15 PM swooning in the rafters by judih Mar 16, 2001 7:43 PM
hormone trombone by cylance Mar 17, 2001 1:02 PM
BeBopBEbopshopbopiteeBOP by salparadise Mar 17, 2001 6:32 PM
running in the high cloud by salparadise Mar 16, 2001 8:37 AM my spirit by cylance Mar 16, 2001 9:57 AM
heal lee yum is contagious by judih Mar 16, 2001 10:08 AM
www.unknownpoets.com by shadow Mar 16, 2001 8:01 AM Moi woprosy by Mandroid Mar 22, 2001 1:57 AM
cockroach by cylance Mar 16, 2001 1:49 AM Mmmmmm by Qlex Mar 18, 2001 7:03 AM
nice by Billectric Mar 18, 2001 9:21 AM
high koo by judih Mar 16, 2001 1:46 AM wow by cylance Mar 16, 2001 2:16 AM
open doors by lemanhauptfreak Mar 16, 2001 2:29 AM
open & unresisting by salparadise Mar 16, 2001 6:22 AM
awake? by trickbaby Mar 16, 2001 9:16 PM
arctic folk by judih Mar 16, 2001 9:39 PM
Blinding Sun Spots by StarryClaire Mar 15, 2001 9:45 PM thanks by cylance Mar 15, 2001 11:41 PM
THANK YOU!!!! by StarryClaire Mar 18, 2001 2:35 PM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 16, 2001 8:36 AM
Postcard from Starry by StarryClaire Mar 18, 2001 7:13 PM
My father always... by StarryClaire Mar 15, 2001 8:57 PM Starry claire by Bobo Mar 17, 2001 7:17 PM
To bobo by StarryClaire Mar 18, 2001 7:12 PM
...with a little self mockery by Hero Mar 15, 2001 8:55 PM To anti city by Bobo Mar 17, 2001 7:19 PM
I love my city by Hero Mar 27, 2001 6:53 PM
we3 (paso robles 1955) by salparadise Mar 15, 2001 7:43 PM You'll never read this by Bobo Apr 4, 2001 8:38 PM
american koan #19 by salparadise Mar 15, 2001 7:35 PM mr salparadise sketches from the corner by judih Mar 15, 2001 7:39 PM
judih juggles fenceposts and licorice by salparadise Mar 15, 2001 7:50 PM
Paint the town red sal said by judih Mar 15, 2001 8:56 PM
Reason (Please comment) by Mangotigerlily Mar 15, 2001 2:54 PM
Out of Here(PLEASE COMMENT!) by Mangotigerlily Mar 15, 2001 2:46 PM hit the road by cylance Mar 17, 2001 1:09 PM
you're talking to me, too...i think by ivanV Mar 20, 2001 12:10 PM
Ballad of Judas Iscariot (Critique's more than welcome) by Severein Mar 15, 2001 12:35 PM
in fractured rapture by salparadise Mar 15, 2001 6:52 AM basic reaction by judih Mar 15, 2001 7:22 AM
eXstatic by salparadise Mar 15, 2001 8:40 AM
yowee by judih Mar 15, 2001 8:59 AM
inhale deep . . . by salparadise Mar 15, 2001 9:07 AM
om is the origianl sound by lemanhauptfreak Mar 15, 2001 11:32 AM
thats knot a butt, methinks by judih Mar 15, 2001 7:21 PM
yo and yoga by lemanhauptfreak Mar 15, 2001 11:33 AM
i dig it no i dont by lemanhauptfreak Mar 15, 2001 11:34 AM
life by lemanhauptfreak Mar 15, 2001 11:35 AM
Eyes held wide open by derelictmindset Mar 14, 2001 9:31 PM "Try not to... by Think4Yourself Mar 14, 2001 11:07 PM
Only You (Sappy love poem, beware, comments always welcome) thanks come again by derelictmindset Mar 14, 2001 9:28 PM thanks for the blurb by Melek-taus Mar 21, 2001 10:17 PM
My Storm by StarryClaire Mar 14, 2001 2:24 PM
The slave by StarryClaire Mar 14, 2001 12:20 PM
A Rainy Night in October and a Copy of Tristessa is Laying on my Bed (Critique this one as well...) by Severein Mar 14, 2001 9:23 AM Yeah by Mangotigerlily Mar 14, 2001 9:40 AM
Triestessa by foofoo Mar 14, 2001 9:47 AM
A Stillborn Dream (PLEASE Comment critique, rip to shreads, etc...) by Severein Mar 14, 2001 9:20 AM this poem . . . by salparadise Mar 14, 2001 10:53 AM
a declaration of free embrace by salparadise Mar 14, 2001 8:42 AM
say purple? only grapes talk the talk by judih Mar 14, 2001 8:02 AM judih questions judih by judih Mar 14, 2001 7:44 PM
see poem below by salparadise Mar 15, 2001 3:46 AM
not here either by salparadise Mar 15, 2001 3:48 AM
! met tall kazoos ! by judih Mar 15, 2001 6:36 AM
yer muse sick . . . by salparadise Mar 15, 2001 7:03 AM
poem 4 judih by salparadise Mar 15, 2001 3:48 AM
sweet baby menthol rush by salparadise Mar 14, 2001 7:42 AM I hear you by cylance Mar 15, 2001 4:17 AM
kiss the serpent (ProseRiver) by prophet Mar 14, 2001 7:39 AM
kiss the serpent (ProseRiver) by prophet Mar 14, 2001 7:35 AM
"Human Zoo"-Please respond, critique, compliment or distilled gonzo nonsense...anything,PLEASE!!!!!! by Tabloid Footprints Mar 14, 2001 12:32 AM
"Human Zoo"-Please respond, critique, compliment or distilled gonzo nonsense...anything,PLEASE!!!!!! by Tabloid Footprints Mar 14, 2001 12:29 AM eye lie kit !!! by cylance Mar 14, 2001 12:54 AM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 14, 2001 3:54 AM
Lyrics... by Think4Yourself Mar 13, 2001 5:19 PM I'd call it . . . by salparadise Mar 13, 2001 7:40 PM
Thanks Sal. by Think4Yourself Mar 13, 2001 7:57 PM
Hmmmmmmmm ...... by salparadise Mar 14, 2001 3:46 AM
cool by toefungusjoe78 Mar 13, 2001 10:26 PM
title by Mangotigerlily Mar 15, 2001 2:41 PM
Fever Induced Vision (comments?) by Think4Yourself Mar 13, 2001 4:38 PM Please read and make your comments by Think4Yourself Mar 14, 2001 11:21 PM
mystic by cylance Mar 15, 2001 2:33 AM
history ( responses please) by toefungusjoe78 Mar 13, 2001 2:54 PM Powerful! by Think4Yourself Mar 13, 2001 4:51 PM
animal whispering by salparadise Mar 13, 2001 1:01 PM remembering prufrock by judih Mar 13, 2001 11:50 PM
April is the cruelest month . . . by salparadise Mar 14, 2001 3:56 AM
sew... by judih Mar 14, 2001 4:17 AM
Sal sez . . . by salparadise Mar 14, 2001 7:34 AM
riding the petunia motorcycle by salparadise Mar 13, 2001 12:34 PM
A Tear by cylance Mar 13, 2001 12:30 PM Thanks. by Think4Yourself Mar 13, 2001 4:53 PM
walking between the spaces by judih Mar 13, 2001 10:17 AM postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 13, 2001 10:42 AM
beautiful by cylance Mar 13, 2001 11:17 AM
Reply by StarryClaire Mar 14, 2001 8:19 PM
The Artist by StarryClaire Mar 13, 2001 8:08 AM torn by cylance Mar 13, 2001 12:55 PM
reply by derelictmindset Mar 13, 2001 1:06 PM
republican hate crime bluez by salparadise Mar 13, 2001 7:08 AM reply by derelictmindset Mar 13, 2001 1:08 PM
tnks by salparadise Mar 13, 2001 7:34 PM
how low does a poet be? by judih Mar 14, 2001 5:52 AM
Good Morning by cylance Mar 13, 2001 4:47 AM
Espainish Fly (replies welcome) by foofoo Mar 12, 2001 10:15 PM sorry by derelictmindset Mar 12, 2001 11:28 PM
Re;sorry by foofoo Mar 13, 2001 9:43 AM
Espainish Fly (replies welcome) by foofoo Mar 12, 2001 10:14 PM
Regeneration by kkizer Mar 12, 2001 7:33 PM Just some of my pretentious jabber by StarryClaire Mar 14, 2001 8:29 PM
A Short Prayer by kkizer Mar 12, 2001 7:27 PM
raven by kkizer Mar 12, 2001 7:10 PM
question by brooklyn Mar 12, 2001 6:29 PM you could go more, by derelictmindset Mar 12, 2001 6:44 PM
my puter's slow anyhow by judih Mar 13, 2001 10:20 AM
One Morning by StarryClaire Mar 12, 2001 6:05 PM beautiful by derelictmindset Mar 12, 2001 6:46 PM
kiss by cylance Mar 12, 2001 2:20 PM reply by derelictmindset Mar 12, 2001 6:47 PM
lucidation (responses please) by allen's beatnik Mar 12, 2001 12:22 PM postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 12, 2001 12:28 PM
Confession #1 {I'd really appreciate as much critique as possible on this one} by Severein Mar 12, 2001 11:58 AM postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 12, 2001 12:23 PM
Thumbs Up by foofoo Mar 13, 2001 12:26 PM
Brrrrrrrrrrimmmmstone! by Melek-taus Mar 21, 2001 10:43 PM
Redemption in the Mist (Comments please!) by StarryClaire Mar 12, 2001 11:15 AM
urban sexpome #12 by salparadise Mar 12, 2001 7:18 AM
scriptures in the sky by salparadise Mar 12, 2001 7:02 AM gulp by judih Mar 12, 2001 7:04 AM
Dusk (Oct. 29) {Please respond with comments, critique or whatever} by Severein Mar 12, 2001 6:27 AM mix works well by judih Mar 12, 2001 7:13 AM
DAMAGED by joshmedsker Mar 12, 2001 4:23 AM
The Lonely Spy (Comments are Excellent) by StarryClaire Mar 11, 2001 9:28 PM
Apparitions of White by StarryClaire Mar 11, 2001 8:21 PM to starryc by StarryClaire Mar 11, 2001 8:27 PM
I Spy by Billectric Mar 11, 2001 8:59 PM
do i believe (judih -?) by judih Mar 11, 2001 12:33 PM postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 12, 2001 3:39 AM
Nice, Good by lucus Mar 12, 2001 4:27 PM
Ode to a Formally NonNormalme by judih Mar 11, 2001 9:16 AM
chasing father midnight by salparadise Mar 11, 2001 6:13 AM
Where Do I Belong? (comments, criticisim, etc; etc;) by derelictmindset Mar 11, 2001 4:37 AM a spurt of nonsensical garble- my opinion of your stuff by StarryClaire Mar 11, 2001 9:37 PM
there are times, by derelictmindset Mar 12, 2001 11:24 PM
may be, yet... by judih Mar 13, 2001 4:02 AM
A cry, if you will.(just tell me it sucks) by prophet Mar 11, 2001 1:19 AM reply by derelictmindset Mar 11, 2001 2:02 AM
Nice! by Wyild Mar 11, 2001 4:53 PM
The Rape of Spring (Comments are MORE than welcome...) by Severein Mar 10, 2001 11:07 PM reply by derelictmindset Mar 11, 2001 2:20 AM
postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 11, 2001 6:15 AM
The Rape of Spring (Comments are MORE than welcome...) by Severein Mar 10, 2001 11:04 PM abandon watt? by judih Mar 12, 2001 7:23 AM
Put this in bed next to yr child (comments appreciated) by syringemouth Mar 10, 2001 4:39 PM
Unnamed (contributions appreciated) by lucus Mar 10, 2001 11:59 AM Whoops COMMENTS APRECIATED please. not contributions! by lucus Mar 11, 2001 9:17 AM
Re: November by lucus Mar 10, 2001 11:19 AM
? ex/impossibly rate ted ......... [responses ! please] by judih Mar 10, 2001 11:11 AM postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 11, 2001 6:17 AM
floats by allen's beatnik Mar 10, 2001 10:40 AM
Thinking by derelictmindset Mar 9, 2001 9:46 PM reply. by Think4Yourself Mar 10, 2001 5:42 AM
Night in Worthing (comments apreciated) by lucus Mar 9, 2001 3:43 PM euphoric by derelictmindset Mar 9, 2001 9:50 PM
weekend by culturehero Mar 8, 2001 2:26 PM Killer! by Think4Yourself Mar 8, 2001 3:35 PM
human seraphim by culturehero Mar 8, 2001 2:09 PM
american koan #42 by salparadise Mar 8, 2001 1:34 PM those of us by judih Mar 11, 2001 8:57 AM
drum bang suburban death march by salparadise Mar 8, 2001 1:28 PM
Running the buddha down/comments please by kkizer Mar 7, 2001 7:01 PM postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 8, 2001 7:17 AM
clear cup of coffee/comments please by kkizer Mar 7, 2001 6:55 PM
The Act/comments please by kkizer Mar 7, 2001 6:45 PM Yes! by Think4Yourself Mar 9, 2001 1:57 PM
Untitled... (please share your thoughts... please) by Think4Yourself Mar 7, 2001 4:36 PM kudos by derelictmindset Mar 7, 2001 8:03 PM
plaintive thoughts of the train journey by culturehero Mar 7, 2001 1:56 PM postcard from sal by salparadise Mar 8, 2001 7:16 AM
Chaos (unbridled honesty appreciated) c'mon i can handle it by derelictmindset Mar 6, 2001 8:15 PM Idle Comment by lucus Mar 7, 2001 11:57 AM
I liked it. by Think4Yourself Mar 7, 2001 4:43 PM
true by derelictmindset Mar 7, 2001 7:46 PM
Heroes ( please critique) by Shagz Mar 6, 2001 4:50 PM interesting by derelictmindset Mar 7, 2001 1:36 AM
run dry by ari Mar 8, 2001 2:00 AM
missing ... by brooklyn Mar 6, 2001 4:38 PM
one moment (critique appreciated) by lucus Mar 4, 2001 2:54 PM
seize any day by ceri_hughes Mar 4, 2001 12:07 PM
Buk Hank by ceri_hughes Mar 4, 2001 12:02 PM
Death. (I hate titles) (critique appreciated) by lucus Mar 4, 2001 9:39 AM the readers by ceri_hughes Mar 4, 2001 12:14 PM
Random Thoughts by derelictmindset Mar 4, 2001 12:38 AM
Walking the Streets (opinions and reflections please) by marcr Mar 2, 2001 10:02 PM I dig it! by Think4Yourself Mar 7, 2001 4:51 PM
mind-fuck by Jean Genet Mar 2, 2001 7:00 PM reply by saxrust Mar 4, 2001 10:17 AM
the screen cracks [could offend, responses appreciated] by culturehero Mar 2, 2001 2:37 PM
elegy [critique welcomed] by culturehero Mar 1, 2001 2:14 PM
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