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Board Archive  •  The Haiku Board  •  August 2001
The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


eye light by mtmynd Aug 30, 2001 8:14 PM
wider wise by judih Aug 30, 2001 8:27 PM
be Yond by mtmynd Aug 31, 2001 6:58 AM
later daze by mtmynd Aug 30, 2001 7:54 PM
christ's sake by mtmynd Aug 30, 2001 7:44 PM
Pre-lube to a Kiss by Doctor Proteus Aug 30, 2001 1:33 PM
rubber feltish? by mtmynd Aug 30, 2001 7:42 PM
The Bridge (PC) by beat_ecstacy Aug 30, 2001 7:27 AM
I like it by Doctor Proteus Aug 30, 2001 1:31 PM
footsteps by mtmynd Aug 30, 2001 6:36 AM
Once again by Doctor Proteus Aug 30, 2001 9:54 AM
tri-vino by mtmynd Aug 30, 2001 7:28 PM
Resistance scanning retinue... by Thefilth Aug 29, 2001 10:13 PM
circle by mtmynd Aug 29, 2001 9:21 PM
disappearing act by judih Aug 29, 2001 9:33 PM
NFJRIKWEORJFNFNMDOOM!!3893JTNFJK by Doctor Proteus Aug 29, 2001 2:38 PM
ant-hill vibratoes by Thefilth Aug 28, 2001 9:20 PM
see the trails by judih Aug 28, 2001 9:23 PM
on end by orange Aug 28, 2001 8:50 PM
...hers does too by Thefilth Aug 28, 2001 9:07 PM
compunction PC by Thefilth Aug 28, 2001 8:14 PM
popular conclusion by judih Aug 28, 2001 8:21 PM
the unsuccess by Thefilth Aug 28, 2001 8:30 PM
Judih's Birthday Haiku by mtmynd Aug 28, 2001 6:54 PM
perfect by judih Aug 28, 2001 7:13 PM
hmmmmm...... by mtmynd Aug 28, 2001 7:49 AM
the feel field by mtmynd Aug 28, 2001 7:09 AM
nine one one by judih Aug 28, 2001 4:18 AM
zentered by mtmynd Aug 28, 2001 6:59 AM
rescue by buddhabitch Aug 28, 2001 8:01 AM
travelling light by judih Aug 29, 2001 3:49 AM
get up and get get n get down by Doctor Proteus Aug 28, 2001 2:02 PM
witness to a changing era by judih Aug 27, 2001 8:53 PM
Vacuum Haiku by Doctor Proteus Aug 27, 2001 11:21 AM
to neutralize or to scream by judih Aug 26, 2001 8:44 PM
kay seinouiray by stedie-eddie Aug 27, 2001 10:49 AM
What will be by Doctor Proteus Aug 27, 2001 11:20 AM
dis-self by mtmynd Aug 26, 2001 1:24 PM
who knows? by mtmynd Aug 26, 2001 11:53 AM
lifeshort by judih Aug 26, 2001 12:51 PM
one thought of while driving my car by Thefilth Aug 26, 2001 10:34 AM
frustration faced by judih Aug 26, 2001 10:11 AM
time by mtmynd Aug 25, 2001 7:35 PM
zone by judih Aug 25, 2001 7:43 PM
nine-twenty-four p.m. by mtmynd Aug 25, 2001 8:24 PM
net shopping haiku by judih Aug 25, 2001 10:31 AM
take a card by judih Aug 25, 2001 2:00 AM
call off the metaphors by judih Aug 24, 2001 10:56 PM
springtime romance haiku by unknownpoet Aug 24, 2001 10:46 PM
Train Whistle Haikus by Doctor Proteus Aug 24, 2001 2:19 PM
Haikus have titles by Thefilth Aug 24, 2001 12:30 PM
nuttin' honey by buddhabitch Aug 24, 2001 9:15 AM
shoulder poem by judih Aug 24, 2001 8:23 AM
Off Ten by mtmynd Aug 24, 2001 6:26 AM
OUt! by judih Aug 24, 2001 6:34 AM
lis ten by buddhabitch Aug 24, 2001 11:34 AM
the anchorwoman and the remote by morally_dubious Aug 24, 2001 2:52 AM
how remote? by buddhabitch Aug 24, 2001 11:29 AM
the art of life-style injuries (2) by morally_dubious Aug 24, 2001 1:27 AM
upbeat by judih Aug 23, 2001 9:06 PM
word usage by akeru Aug 23, 2001 11:50 PM
playground by buddhabitch Aug 24, 2001 11:22 AM
!0th storey window ledge by morally_dubious Aug 23, 2001 4:16 PM
Dribble by Doctor Proteus Aug 23, 2001 1:06 PM
imbibe by judih Aug 23, 2001 1:27 PM
touch end by judih Aug 23, 2001 8:49 AM
INNER CITY NORTHERN ZEN PUNK HAIKU by M.D.Poet Aug 23, 2001 8:03 AM
midnight by buddhabitch Aug 23, 2001 7:19 AM
Trans It by mtmynd Aug 23, 2001 6:34 AM
dying to discover by judih Aug 25, 2001 2:16 AM
light as a feather haiku by buddhabitch Aug 22, 2001 8:19 AM
pull me by my wings by judih Aug 22, 2001 8:40 PM
always halfways by mtmynd Aug 21, 2001 7:30 AM
Now that by Doctor Proteus Aug 21, 2001 7:48 AM
greetings.. by mtmynd Aug 22, 2001 6:44 AM
brain clicks by Doctor Proteus Aug 22, 2001 7:02 AM
koaniac by buddhabitch Aug 21, 2001 6:21 AM
illusion by judih Aug 21, 2001 8:00 PM
one more by akeru Aug 20, 2001 11:47 PM
hum beat gone slow by judih Aug 21, 2001 4:05 AM
my reflections as a fetus by akeru Aug 20, 2001 11:45 PM
world shrinks by judih Aug 23, 2001 9:04 PM
life expands by akeru Aug 23, 2001 11:55 PM
see ya by akeru Aug 20, 2001 11:26 PM
to a spirit with dysbelief by judih Aug 20, 2001 8:06 PM
Family Resemblance by Doctor Proteus Aug 20, 2001 12:22 PM
Places I have seen Haiku by Doctor Proteus Aug 20, 2001 12:20 PM
up straining to top by judih Aug 20, 2001 6:46 AM
usually by orange Aug 20, 2001 1:46 AM
cycling by Luke Skywalker Aug 19, 2001 11:20 AM
listen to the hum by judih Aug 19, 2001 7:38 PM
sailing by Luke Skywalker Aug 19, 2001 11:19 AM
watta nite by mtmynd Aug 19, 2001 9:25 AM
we got... by orange Aug 20, 2001 1:34 AM
turkish coffee by judih Aug 19, 2001 8:08 AM
micro bursted haiku by buddhabitch Aug 19, 2001 6:40 AM
can you hear me comin? by judih Aug 19, 2001 4:41 AM
ya yas by buddhabitch Aug 19, 2001 7:03 AM
boyfriends back by judih Aug 19, 2001 4:40 AM
unknown poet by judih Aug 18, 2001 3:58 AM
thought prints by orange Aug 20, 2001 1:28 AM
SAmson by judih Aug 18, 2001 2:20 AM
Modern Haiku by buddhabitch Aug 18, 2001 12:53 AM
belly bounce by orange Aug 17, 2001 5:49 PM
billectric by judih Aug 17, 2001 7:55 AM
stevadore by judih Aug 17, 2001 7:54 AM
psst, little girl haiku by buddhabitch Aug 17, 2001 5:16 AM
loading up by mtmynd Aug 17, 2001 5:11 AM
alain 1 to infinity by judih Aug 17, 2001 3:24 AM
influences by judih Aug 17, 2001 3:02 AM
firecracker by judih Aug 17, 2001 2:33 AM
awakening by buddhabitch Aug 16, 2001 11:37 AM
after the storm by buddhabitch Aug 16, 2001 11:35 AM
HEARTACHE by alias Aug 16, 2001 9:25 AM
lisa jude ensued by judih Aug 16, 2001 8:53 AM
novalark media radar by judih Aug 16, 2001 8:51 AM
sharik shogun by judih Aug 16, 2001 7:56 AM
seasons haiku by buddhabitch Aug 16, 2001 7:43 AM
gathering forces by judih Aug 16, 2001 7:51 AM
Storm Signal by mtmynd Aug 16, 2001 7:06 AM
joshua leaving traces by judih Aug 15, 2001 8:50 PM
truly,man, by joshuagriffin Aug 15, 2001 10:47 PM
Haiku for the Feeble Twisted Minds by Thadikoopitops Aug 15, 2001 1:31 PM
doe reen by judih Aug 15, 2001 10:40 AM
awww geeezzzzz *blush* by doreen peri Aug 15, 2001 10:16 PM
kate from kairo by judih Aug 15, 2001 10:37 AM
i am humbled by kairo Aug 16, 2001 6:43 AM
homage to greats by judih Aug 15, 2001 10:36 AM
markk everywhere by judih Aug 15, 2001 10:34 AM
Levi the Asher-est by judih Aug 15, 2001 10:33 AM
Grand Graham by judih Aug 15, 2001 10:30 AM
european minstrel by judih Aug 15, 2001 5:04 AM
orange by judih Aug 15, 2001 5:01 AM
jotadavida by judih Aug 15, 2001 4:59 AM
judi in de skies by jotadavida Aug 16, 2001 1:35 PM
sheik jo by judih Aug 17, 2001 7:52 AM
sea sill and sue sun by judih Aug 15, 2001 4:58 AM
hey jud haiku by buddhabitch Aug 15, 2001 3:16 PM
hand holding by judih Aug 16, 2001 7:54 AM
jazz cat craig by judih Aug 15, 2001 4:56 AM
wild bill colorado by judih Aug 15, 2001 4:54 AM
earth guru by judih Aug 15, 2001 4:53 AM
Open Fist. by BroodingHall Aug 15, 2001 12:29 AM
Clenched Palm. by BroodingHall Aug 15, 2001 12:34 AM
She by BroodingHall Aug 15, 2001 12:41 AM
Beginner by BroodingHall Aug 15, 2001 12:46 AM
Stolen Haiku by Thadikoopitops Aug 14, 2001 11:08 AM
haiku proof by buddhabitch Aug 14, 2001 11:53 AM
zen blend haiku by buddhabitch Aug 14, 2001 7:40 AM
lamentation haiku by buddhabitch Aug 14, 2001 6:55 AM
more by Thadikoopitops Aug 14, 2001 11:05 AM
message massage by mtmynd Aug 14, 2001 6:51 AM
ready by judih Aug 14, 2001 4:16 AM
spinning top by judih Aug 13, 2001 4:55 AM
drunken beachtime professors by orange Aug 12, 2001 11:38 PM
prof drumk with power by jotadavida Aug 13, 2001 3:05 PM
just by BroodingHall Aug 15, 2001 12:37 AM
Note by Leonard Aug 12, 2001 9:53 PM
clouds paint clarity by judih Aug 12, 2001 9:56 PM
Yunnan by Leonard Aug 12, 2001 9:51 PM
Lijang painting by judih Aug 12, 2001 9:54 PM
(untitled) by alias Aug 12, 2001 8:36 PM
part II by alias Aug 12, 2001 8:46 PM
mountain haiku by buddhabitch Aug 12, 2001 6:32 PM
scents by mtmynd Aug 12, 2001 6:28 PM
desert haiku 4 by buddhabitch Aug 12, 2001 6:26 PM
desert haiku III by buddhabitch Aug 12, 2001 6:24 PM
desert haiku two by buddhabitch Aug 12, 2001 5:38 PM
desert haiku by buddhabitch Aug 12, 2001 5:36 PM
big boom by mtmynd Aug 12, 2001 5:31 PM
cycle by mtmynd Aug 12, 2001 5:15 PM
longhorn haiku #27 by mtmynd Aug 12, 2001 5:00 PM
yin arches by judih Aug 12, 2001 11:19 AM
sex. by alias Aug 11, 2001 11:25 PM
nurture you. by alias Aug 11, 2001 11:22 PM
cecil gave me quarter by jotadavida Aug 11, 2001 8:02 PM
imatation lamation by buddhabitch Aug 11, 2001 11:30 AM
Punk Q!! by mtmynd Aug 11, 2001 10:35 AM
keyboard quote by jotadavida Aug 11, 2001 7:57 PM
quack by mtmynd Aug 11, 2001 10:31 AM
be kind to your web-footed friends by jotadavida Aug 11, 2001 7:58 PM
saturnday by mtmynd Aug 11, 2001 9:57 AM
beat it... by buddhabitch Aug 11, 2001 9:29 AM
feast by mtmynd Aug 11, 2001 9:33 AM
suppose by judih Aug 11, 2001 8:56 AM
brief encounter by mtmynd Aug 11, 2001 12:06 PM
4U by mtmynd Aug 11, 2001 7:33 AM
a jot by buddhabitch Aug 11, 2001 7:40 AM
you might find by jotadavida Aug 11, 2001 7:55 PM
Reverse Haiku by Necron99 Aug 11, 2001 1:40 AM
ukiah by buddhabitch Aug 11, 2001 7:25 AM
approach by mtmynd Aug 11, 2001 7:30 AM
felix cat insanity by judih Aug 10, 2001 10:33 PM
Last line by Necron99 Aug 11, 2001 1:32 AM
An out of setting sun by orange Aug 10, 2001 12:03 PM
how to describe by judih Aug 10, 2001 7:18 AM
tortoise shell in summer by jotadavida Aug 10, 2001 8:15 PM
now new enough by buddhabitch Aug 10, 2001 6:31 AM
crocquet in the alley by jotadavida Aug 10, 2001 8:51 PM
ornaments by mtmynd Aug 10, 2001 5:14 AM
parse the planet please by jotadavida Aug 10, 2001 8:49 PM
imagine that! by mtmynd Aug 10, 2001 5:07 AM
can see them in a glance by judih Aug 10, 2001 7:15 AM
stretch them out by jotadavida Aug 10, 2001 8:19 PM
other eyes by judih Aug 10, 2001 2:59 AM
the shadow by jotadavida Aug 10, 2001 8:21 PM
lookin by judih Aug 9, 2001 7:27 PM
joyce was right by jotadavida Aug 10, 2001 8:24 PM
Nathan's plot by buddhabitch Aug 9, 2001 7:03 AM
nate sure by judih Aug 10, 2001 2:57 AM
inna by mtmynd Aug 9, 2001 6:27 AM
inagodadivita by buddhabitch Aug 9, 2001 6:56 AM
innajotadavida by jotadavida Aug 11, 2001 5:33 PM
back from the haze by orange Aug 8, 2001 2:32 PM
steamed surprise by judih Aug 8, 2001 8:12 PM
orange juiced by buddhabitch Aug 9, 2001 7:08 AM
play now, pay later by buddhabitch Aug 8, 2001 7:10 AM
afterjob by mtmynd Aug 8, 2001 5:21 PM
1947 refugee by judih Aug 8, 2001 5:58 AM
my father's war by jotadavida Aug 10, 2001 8:33 PM
untitled by unknownpoet Aug 7, 2001 2:10 PM
Campbell Valley Haiku by unknownpoet Aug 7, 2001 2:08 PM
Corn and the Damage Done by Thadikoopitops Aug 7, 2001 12:48 PM
childness by judih Aug 7, 2001 11:24 AM
the kid in fall by jotadavida Aug 10, 2001 8:35 PM
waving arms like chiffon clouds by judih Aug 7, 2001 3:14 AM
bolt sky blue by jotadavida Aug 10, 2001 8:37 PM
bonsai goodbye by buddhabitch Aug 6, 2001 6:46 AM
color of trooth by mtmynd Aug 6, 2001 6:14 AM
water boiling by judih Aug 5, 2001 7:47 PM
tea in rain by jotadavida Aug 10, 2001 8:40 PM
good morn by buddhabitch Aug 5, 2001 9:22 AM
screaming rain by judih Aug 5, 2001 4:29 AM
it never rains in california by jotadavida Aug 10, 2001 8:42 PM
date by mtmynd Aug 4, 2001 5:50 PM
ooom-ka by mtmynd Aug 4, 2001 2:18 PM
for amy by unknownpoet Aug 4, 2001 12:11 AM
on lost love by joshuagriffin Aug 4, 2001 1:06 AM
mmm! mushrooms make tripping marvellous by unknownpoet Aug 3, 2001 11:28 PM
Sombreros In Summer by unknownpoet Aug 3, 2001 11:26 PM
thank you by buddhabitch Aug 3, 2001 9:11 PM
his death wish by judih Aug 3, 2001 7:32 PM
that open book test by jotadavida Aug 10, 2001 8:46 PM
blues by buddhabitch Aug 3, 2001 6:44 AM
afterglow by mtmynd Aug 3, 2001 6:41 AM
one red ball by judih Aug 2, 2001 7:59 PM
the glitter ball by jotadavida Aug 10, 2001 8:47 PM
SAMURAI by ribot358 Aug 2, 2001 4:47 AM
Sex by unknownpoet Aug 3, 2001 11:31 PM
The Stars by ribot358 Aug 2, 2001 4:42 AM
chiaroscura by judih Aug 2, 2001 2:56 AM
inside the box by buddhabitch Aug 5, 2001 11:10 AM
pope pie by mtmynd Aug 1, 2001 9:27 PM
smack lips by judih Aug 1, 2001 8:38 PM


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