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Board Archive  •  The Haiku Board  •  July 2001
The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


way out qwest by mtmynd Jul 31, 2001 6:07 AM
golden gate bridge by buddhabitch Jul 31, 2001 6:10 AM
nature lesson by mtmynd Jul 31, 2001 6:21 AM
restrung by buddhabitch Jul 31, 2001 6:27 AM
crystaline bait by buddhabitch Jul 31, 2001 6:10 AM
the jury comes in by buddhabitch Jul 31, 2001 5:59 AM
mt ness every where by judih Jul 31, 2001 10:27 AM
must feed 'em better by unknownpoet Jul 31, 2001 1:21 AM
17 bottles by judih Jul 31, 2001 2:09 AM
grunt bottled sentences by judih Jul 30, 2001 2:21 AM
haiku #9785 by unknownpoet Jul 28, 2001 8:58 PM
haiku #9799 by unknownpoet Jul 28, 2001 8:57 PM
unsung by judih Jul 28, 2001 8:54 PM
haikus dont need titles. by unknownpoet Jul 28, 2001 4:56 PM
when i'm gone by judih Jul 28, 2001 10:43 AM
grateful to be live by judih Jul 28, 2001 4:18 AM
let go by judih Jul 28, 2001 12:24 AM
grapeseed oil by judih Jul 27, 2001 2:13 PM
breath before belief by judih Jul 26, 2001 9:31 PM
monkey business by buddhabitch Jul 26, 2001 7:06 AM
so you hoird about saydee, goitrude, + thelma? by judih Jul 26, 2001 8:08 AM
ahhh yes by buddhabitch Jul 26, 2001 8:23 AM
rubbin belly for luck by judih Jul 26, 2001 8:28 AM
sacred sarcasm by buddhabitch Jul 26, 2001 6:57 AM
off to energy journey by judih Jul 25, 2001 8:28 PM
great escape by mtmynd Jul 25, 2001 9:22 PM
standing on the edge by buddhabitch Jul 25, 2001 6:31 AM
box of sun by judih Jul 25, 2001 5:27 AM
thirst slaked by buddhabitch Jul 24, 2001 11:03 AM
breath of fresh rain by judih Jul 24, 2001 11:07 AM
are you beat? by buddhabitch Jul 24, 2001 7:29 AM
on why I dye my heart black by unknownpoet Jul 23, 2001 11:48 PM
why my dead heart sighs back by judih Jul 24, 2001 5:33 AM
met trix by judih Jul 23, 2001 7:14 PM
buzz my buffalo by judih Jul 23, 2001 8:16 AM
buffalo blanket by buddhabitch Jul 23, 2001 8:42 AM
brown robes, pierre (by mtmynd) by buddhabitch Jul 23, 2001 8:10 AM
climbing by buddhabitch Jul 23, 2001 7:51 AM
The Picture of Dorian Eros by mtmynd Jul 23, 2001 7:16 AM
on memory by joshuagriffin Jul 23, 2001 3:11 AM
griffin spokes by buddhabitch Jul 23, 2001 7:23 AM
thanks by joshuagriffin Jul 23, 2001 10:52 AM
is haiku japanese for achoo? by unknownpoet Jul 23, 2001 1:18 AM
tis you? by buddhabitch Jul 23, 2001 8:22 AM
toast! by mtmynd Jul 23, 2001 8:28 AM
day at the beach by judih Jul 23, 2001 12:49 AM
sacred rhymeless truths....or...you can't keep a good book hidden forever by judih Jul 21, 2001 9:07 PM
to buddhabee and friends by judih Jul 22, 2001 2:29 AM
nope, not yet by buddhabitch Jul 23, 2001 8:39 AM
saturday a.m. by mtmynd Jul 21, 2001 7:54 AM
anotha cuppa by buddhabitch Jul 21, 2001 7:59 AM
cee cruise by buddhabitch Jul 21, 2001 7:48 AM
phunnie by buddhabitch Jul 20, 2001 10:13 PM
greased wheels by buddhabitch Jul 20, 2001 9:39 PM
untitled by firecracker Jul 20, 2001 5:30 PM
ode to marylin monroe by joshuagriffin Jul 20, 2001 5:12 PM
gonzo ego by buddhabitch Jul 20, 2001 3:38 PM
egotrippin dexlux suite by joshuagriffin Jul 20, 2001 4:47 PM
basho on my side, yes he is by joshuagriffin Jul 20, 2001 12:59 PM
maybe this time by judih Jul 20, 2001 12:57 PM
ahhh.. hope by mtmynd Jul 20, 2001 7:34 AM
first quarter by buddhabitch Jul 20, 2001 6:15 AM
pry by judih Jul 19, 2001 8:10 PM
mourning time by buddhabitch Jul 19, 2001 6:54 AM
untittled experiment by joshuagriffin Jul 18, 2001 8:10 PM
wrestling by judih Jul 18, 2001 8:23 PM
the text by orange Jul 18, 2001 1:53 PM
zen smoke stick by joshuagriffin Jul 18, 2001 11:08 AM
no bull by buddhabitch Jul 18, 2001 10:57 AM
Insomniac eyes by joshuagriffin Jul 18, 2001 1:37 AM
close call by judih Jul 18, 2001 5:55 AM
R.E.M. by joshuagriffin Jul 18, 2001 11:05 AM
zoom on in by judih Jul 18, 2001 1:32 AM
Tumbang Preso by litopalco Jul 17, 2001 11:18 PM
the sound of one lover waiting by judih Jul 17, 2001 8:05 PM
close the door by judih Jul 16, 2001 8:53 PM
the door is closed by mtmynd Jul 16, 2001 10:09 PM
sudden crowds by judih Jul 16, 2001 10:12 PM
shade by mtmynd Jul 16, 2001 10:45 PM
joy in choice by judih Jul 17, 2001 5:10 AM
real courage by orange Jul 17, 2001 11:05 AM
touch me, its so easy by judih Jul 16, 2001 10:01 AM
potfull by mtmynd Jul 16, 2001 6:28 AM
a little sugar please by buddhabitch Jul 18, 2001 10:52 AM
this morning by orange Jul 15, 2001 11:54 AM
her memory by joshuagriffin Jul 15, 2001 11:43 PM
new age notes by mtmynd Jul 15, 2001 8:23 AM
digesting the be bop questing by judih Jul 15, 2001 4:14 AM
judih judih pup pet i'm by judih Jul 15, 2001 2:52 AM
kids 'n all by mtmynd Jul 15, 2001 8:14 AM
smiling baby happy flower by jotadavida Jul 15, 2001 12:47 PM
dearest playwrite, by judih Jul 15, 2001 12:56 PM
he died trying by mtmynd Jul 14, 2001 8:23 PM
bad hair day by jotadavida Jul 15, 2001 11:56 AM
dagon by stevadore Jul 17, 2001 7:47 AM
flying plastic appointments by orange Jul 14, 2001 5:12 PM
passive porcupines by orange Jul 14, 2001 5:05 PM
a wake up by orange Jul 14, 2001 9:53 AM
wakefullness by mtmynd Jul 14, 2001 10:10 AM
erasure by mtmynd Jul 14, 2001 7:49 AM
underground rails by buddhabitch Jul 18, 2001 10:45 AM
Saturday afternoon chocolate and byrds by judih Jul 14, 2001 6:21 AM
'shrooms by mtmynd Jul 13, 2001 10:30 PM
gathering by judih Jul 14, 2001 1:06 AM
I tripped on acid last night by jotadavida Jul 15, 2001 12:50 PM
do you speak gaelic by judih Jul 13, 2001 10:20 AM
garlic breath by jotadavida Jul 13, 2001 8:04 PM
at the steak by judih Jul 14, 2001 1:26 AM
silent shadow by mtmynd Jul 13, 2001 7:25 AM
tiny gorgeous cup by judih Jul 13, 2001 3:13 AM
tarot meditation by judih Jul 12, 2001 8:26 PM
...and more... by mtmynd Jul 13, 2001 5:58 AM
dont take my notes away by judih Jul 12, 2001 12:53 PM
professor saturn tutorial by buddhabitch Jul 11, 2001 10:35 PM
interesting by judih Jul 11, 2001 10:54 PM
damned if i dont by judih Jul 11, 2001 9:59 AM
pass the popcorn by mtmynd Jul 11, 2001 4:41 PM
choking on a seed by judih Jul 11, 2001 8:01 PM
wildfire by judih Jul 11, 2001 4:17 AM
dainty poor selene by judih Jul 11, 2001 2:25 AM
Verge by joshuagriffin Jul 10, 2001 10:58 PM
family values by judih Jul 10, 2001 1:22 PM
wake myself by hiwayhobo Jul 10, 2001 9:40 AM
garden of gaza by mtmynd Jul 10, 2001 6:00 AM
suicide bomber by judih Jul 10, 2001 6:07 AM
hatfields and mccoys by mtmynd Jul 10, 2001 6:53 AM
nemesis by stevadore Jul 10, 2001 8:18 AM
observing, not serving by mtmynd Jul 10, 2001 8:44 AM
excused or accused by stevadore Jul 10, 2001 9:35 AM
puppet tear by buddhabitch Jul 13, 2001 8:37 AM
sparks flying by judih Jul 10, 2001 1:48 AM
blue radio disharge mixing with the shattered blue spark windshield by Tabloid Footprints Jul 10, 2001 7:36 PM
within a place, without a face by mtmynd Jul 9, 2001 8:17 PM
empty house by judih Jul 9, 2001 7:39 PM
9:30 p.m. by judih Jul 9, 2001 7:25 PM
cliquety clack by buddhabitch Jul 9, 2001 7:20 AM
multiple personalities by judih Jul 9, 2001 5:20 AM
pultimle mursonpalities by mtmynd Jul 9, 2001 7:11 AM
pancake words by judih Jul 9, 2001 12:09 AM
yummy! by buddhabitch Jul 9, 2001 7:16 AM
mother goddess day by judih Jul 8, 2001 8:31 PM
Rorscharch test by judih Jul 8, 2001 4:43 AM
after the noise falls by judih Jul 8, 2001 4:23 AM
paranoia back shivers by judih Jul 7, 2001 8:40 PM
reverse osmosis by Doctor Proteus Jul 7, 2001 5:16 PM
where to whisper? by judih Jul 7, 2001 11:15 AM
teary eyed american mush hour by judih Jul 7, 2001 10:51 AM
Some Haiku (PC) by November Jones Jul 7, 2001 7:50 AM
Weary by stknighton Jul 7, 2001 2:37 AM
open windows by judih Jul 7, 2001 2:49 AM
HHHHHHAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIku. by Doctor Proteus Jul 6, 2001 9:04 PM
eaten stew by joshuagriffin Jul 7, 2001 1:11 AM
Feastin at Doc's Place by judih Jul 7, 2001 1:19 AM
It's a Big Cubicle, Though... by aemeritz Jul 6, 2001 2:19 PM
quiet now the boat is docking by judih Jul 6, 2001 12:25 PM
sleepin with de fishes by jotadavida Jul 6, 2001 1:52 PM
Twas said. by stknighton Jul 6, 2001 11:00 AM
allegory by judih Jul 6, 2001 11:04 AM
crystal pieces by stevadore Jul 6, 2001 10:55 AM
leti on mountain top by buddhabitch Jul 6, 2001 7:53 AM
pack the flannels by judih Jul 6, 2001 8:02 AM
mountain treats by buddhabitch Jul 6, 2001 9:38 AM
thanks, but have Greb Kodiaks by judih Jul 6, 2001 10:05 AM
dirty word by buddhabitch Jul 6, 2001 10:38 AM
favourite grebs by judih Jul 6, 2001 10:51 AM
4th by gonzobeat Jul 6, 2001 7:07 AM
Another Lame Haiku by Doctor Proteus Jul 6, 2001 6:39 AM
ears ago by mtmynd Jul 6, 2001 6:22 AM
sigh giggle toke by judih Jul 5, 2001 9:52 PM
hot moon by mtmynd Jul 5, 2001 10:49 PM
cat as zen master by buddhabitch Jul 5, 2001 9:38 PM
O! that cat of nine by mtmynd Jul 5, 2001 9:50 PM
location, location by buddhabitch Jul 5, 2001 8:02 PM
Bright black haiku by kkizer Jul 5, 2001 2:59 PM
Independence Day by kkizer Jul 5, 2001 2:59 PM
there's a candle... by orange Jul 5, 2001 2:35 PM
La Push by Doctor Proteus Jul 5, 2001 2:28 PM
LOL by mtmynd Jul 5, 2001 5:47 PM
who will tempt me by judih Jul 5, 2001 1:28 PM
said the spider to the fly by buddhabitch Jul 5, 2001 5:02 PM
Honey is my weakness by judih Jul 5, 2001 7:40 PM
honey, honey, honey! by buddhabitch Jul 5, 2001 7:59 PM
slave for life by judih Jul 5, 2001 8:41 PM
its tasteful, even pleasent by orange Jul 5, 2001 12:13 PM
never knew by judih Jul 5, 2001 5:44 AM
ballast as poems surrender subconscious to wordvana by mtmynd Jul 5, 2001 6:44 AM
Dis-moi! by jotadavida Jul 4, 2001 11:14 PM
dear diary by jotadavida Jul 4, 2001 11:11 PM
cling to the candle when the rain sets in by jotadavida Jul 4, 2001 11:04 PM
hey spider man by jotadavida Jul 4, 2001 11:00 PM
silk threads by judih Jul 4, 2001 11:04 PM
man bites by judih Jul 4, 2001 10:24 PM
hole in de soul window of my wall by jotadavida Jul 4, 2001 10:57 PM
melted cube by joshuagriffin Jul 4, 2001 9:20 PM
what'll it be by judih Jul 4, 2001 7:47 PM
southwest wind by orange Jul 4, 2001 8:46 AM
oasis by mtmynd Jul 4, 2001 9:01 AM
wind o change by buddhabitch Jul 4, 2001 9:06 AM
clam baked by mtmynd Jul 4, 2001 7:31 AM
fade by mtmynd Jul 4, 2001 6:48 AM
perception, a tad askew by buddhabitch Jul 4, 2001 6:41 AM
mind 2 mind by judih Jul 4, 2001 6:45 AM
perception, a tad acute by buddhabitch Jul 4, 2001 7:26 AM
distance by judih Jul 4, 2001 7:35 AM
good advice by buddhabitch Jul 4, 2001 8:11 AM
Take me, I'm Yours by buddhabitch Jul 4, 2001 6:05 AM
rest and restoration by orange Jul 3, 2001 11:00 PM
rolled and old by orange Jul 3, 2001 11:30 AM
bounces by joshuagriffin Jul 3, 2001 3:24 PM
slow walk off broadway by judih Jul 3, 2001 10:18 AM
tour bus by judih Jul 3, 2001 10:55 AM
The Cutter by AngelHeadedHipster Jul 3, 2001 5:48 AM
not so simple by stevadore Jul 3, 2001 6:33 AM
spite by mtmynd Jul 3, 2001 6:50 AM
united states by buddhabitch Jul 3, 2001 7:47 AM
thanx 4 de replies by AngelHeadedHipster Jul 4, 2001 5:33 AM
The Pink Beer Haiku by Doctor Proteus Jul 2, 2001 8:03 PM
hand job haiku by Doctor Proteus Jul 2, 2001 2:36 PM
blow job haiku by joshuagriffin Jul 2, 2001 2:41 PM
wisp of suggestion by judih Jul 2, 2001 7:26 PM
lamentation by stevadore Jul 2, 2001 12:44 PM
a breather by stevadore Jul 2, 2001 12:28 PM
zzz... by Doctor Proteus Jul 2, 2001 9:35 PM
square shapes work best by judih Jul 2, 2001 11:00 AM
hmmm by orange Jul 2, 2001 10:20 AM
a cat by joshuagriffin Jul 2, 2001 10:21 AM
tom&jerry by orange Jul 2, 2001 10:34 AM
leap by joshuagriffin Jul 2, 2001 11:56 AM
a smirk by orange Jul 2, 2001 1:51 PM
the chase by joshuagriffin Jul 2, 2001 2:08 PM
a puzzled look by orange Jul 3, 2001 11:21 AM
"ha" by joshuagriffin Jul 4, 2001 9:00 PM
reply by orange Jul 5, 2001 9:17 AM
jostling with karma by mtmynd Jul 2, 2001 8:10 AM
pupcycle by buddhabitch Jul 2, 2001 6:55 AM
Mountain Haiku - the pine cafe by buddhabitch Jul 2, 2001 6:51 AM
The Compliment by buddhabitch Jul 2, 2001 6:48 AM
frightened by joshuagriffin Jul 1, 2001 10:41 PM
twinkin' its evil eye by mtmynd Jul 1, 2001 8:38 PM
junk food pervert by judih Jul 1, 2001 8:48 PM
UB write by mtmynd Jul 2, 2001 6:17 AM
non colesterolling by buddhabitch Jul 2, 2001 6:40 AM
die for diatribe by judih Jul 1, 2001 8:32 PM


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