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The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


ant trails by judih May 31, 2001 8:30 AM
how many by judih May 31, 2001 8:33 AM
mustant sally by judih May 31, 2001 8:35 AM
reward by mtmynd May 31, 2001 5:44 PM
Haiku May 31 by kkizer May 31, 2001 8:02 AM
abuzz by mtmynd May 31, 2001 8:01 AM
alzheimer buddhas by aone44055 May 31, 2001 5:31 AM
Mount Phobias by mtmynd May 30, 2001 8:59 PM
hemingway cuckoo by judih May 30, 2001 7:53 PM
Ernie by gonzobeat May 31, 2001 5:45 AM
silohuette by aone44055 May 30, 2001 3:45 PM
mystery by aone44055 May 30, 2001 3:01 PM
Alone by aone44055 May 30, 2001 1:11 PM
May 29 by mightychip May 30, 2001 7:35 AM
twist by mtmynd May 30, 2001 7:08 AM
bedpost dream collector by onebigbelch Jun 3, 2001 8:31 PM
sparks muffled by judih May 29, 2001 7:49 PM
bloodmudsupersud by Doctor Proteus May 29, 2001 11:14 AM
gosho! by mtmynd May 29, 2001 6:28 AM
gone fishin by judih May 29, 2001 9:38 AM
bellies and attitudes by judih May 29, 2001 5:54 AM
gracias garcia by judih May 28, 2001 1:36 AM
hey judith by dalphine May 28, 2001 1:44 AM
like to talk but by judih May 28, 2001 1:45 AM
pride by dalphine May 28, 2001 1:52 AM
cut the kitsch by judih May 28, 2001 2:03 AM
SLEEP ON IT by dalphine May 28, 2001 2:09 AM
sounds right by judih May 28, 2001 2:11 AM
gassho by judih May 28, 2001 1:34 AM
Burnt out match by dalphine May 28, 2001 1:31 AM
,,<<>>)(^^^^^^#@$~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~* by Doctor Proteus Jun 3, 2001 10:54 AM
Cheap Watch by Doctor Proteus May 27, 2001 2:38 PM
ugly thing by ANNY May 28, 2001 3:10 AM
uglier thing by Doctor Proteus May 28, 2001 4:33 PM
giggling shuffle by judih May 27, 2001 2:14 AM
snowy days in June by Doctor Proteus May 27, 2001 11:58 AM
May 26 by mightychip May 26, 2001 9:57 PM
rocking the baby by Ketchek May 26, 2001 7:17 AM
chosen by judih May 26, 2001 7:31 AM
hmmm by rae May 29, 2001 6:19 PM
cons by judih May 26, 2001 12:20 AM
prose... cons by mtmynd May 26, 2001 5:39 AM
cons by Ketchek May 26, 2001 7:08 AM
*** by mightychip May 26, 2001 9:59 PM
cold tile floor by Ketchek May 25, 2001 5:08 PM
toenail by Doctor Proteus May 25, 2001 7:31 AM
hearsayer by mtmynd May 25, 2001 6:16 AM
every forty by judih May 24, 2001 7:53 PM
Hamil's Nature Haiku by Hamilwhois10yrs May 24, 2001 12:45 PM
200 Haiku by kkizer May 24, 2001 11:28 AM
yes... by mightychip May 24, 2001 3:31 PM
warmth by akuwilson May 24, 2001 10:33 AM
environmentally pleased by judih May 24, 2001 10:57 AM
gravity by judih May 24, 2001 6:50 AM
real eyes by mtmynd May 24, 2001 6:40 AM
perrier lime in time by judih May 24, 2001 6:55 AM
raven's pray by mtmynd May 23, 2001 6:53 PM
in the city by mightychip May 23, 2001 10:54 PM
Haiku that Pleases Grandmas Around the World by Doctor Proteus May 23, 2001 11:14 AM
very good by stevadore May 23, 2001 11:35 AM
further by mightychip May 23, 2001 10:51 PM
wet pants con'd by akuwilson May 24, 2001 12:50 PM
poetry and coffee by rae May 23, 2001 9:31 AM
Chicken Nugget Haiku by Doctor Proteus May 22, 2001 11:16 AM
your nugget... by mtmynd May 22, 2001 4:52 PM
wake and bake by gonzobeat May 22, 2001 7:27 AM
escape by mtmynd May 22, 2001 7:15 AM
VILENESS by ANNY May 22, 2001 1:19 AM
May 21 by mightychip May 21, 2001 10:52 PM
cool.. by mtmynd May 22, 2001 7:04 AM
thanks by mightychip May 22, 2001 3:49 PM
Yass, now. Well... by god May 21, 2001 10:46 PM
sing for me by judih May 21, 2001 8:10 PM
war deaf by mtmynd May 22, 2001 8:21 AM
hindsight by boxmaker May 21, 2001 3:50 PM
free your self by mtmynd May 21, 2001 4:45 PM
Good, but not yet great (can't blame you) by god May 21, 2001 10:48 PM
know one by mtmynd May 22, 2001 7:00 AM
longhorn haiku #29 by mtmynd May 21, 2001 7:47 AM
my summer haiku by ANNY May 21, 2001 3:49 AM
beached wail by judih May 21, 2001 3:58 AM
and another one by ANNY May 21, 2001 3:59 AM
easy to participate by judih May 21, 2001 4:00 AM
mmm by ANNY May 21, 2001 4:04 AM
mess found by judih May 21, 2001 4:08 AM
what a thirst by ANNY May 21, 2001 4:16 AM
14:21 pm by ANNY May 21, 2001 4:26 AM
dividend by judih May 21, 2001 5:00 AM
Dark at Noon Thoughts by Doctor Proteus May 20, 2001 4:48 PM
pair o' dime by mtmynd May 20, 2001 10:10 AM
longhorn haiku #27 by mtmynd May 20, 2001 9:49 AM
shining radiant buddha man by judih May 20, 2001 9:55 AM
blush red by mtmynd May 20, 2001 10:29 AM
May 20 Haiku by kkizer May 20, 2001 9:22 AM
*** by mightychip May 20, 2001 9:51 AM
nice by Ketchek May 26, 2001 7:14 AM
telenovella by judih May 20, 2001 5:54 AM
buddha's web by mtmynd May 20, 2001 11:04 AM
longhorn haiku #26 by mtmynd May 19, 2001 10:20 AM
mt remynd me by judih May 19, 2001 10:26 AM
the tale of the tail by mtmynd May 19, 2001 11:03 AM
btw: by mtmynd May 19, 2001 1:22 PM
gotta learn that language by judih May 19, 2001 7:03 PM
chop sticks, carry tea by mtmynd May 19, 2001 10:15 AM
bird bath by mtmynd May 18, 2001 5:02 PM
crazed loons by judih May 18, 2001 8:05 PM
longhorn haiku #23 by mtmynd May 18, 2001 4:58 PM
fluff me your forehead by judih May 17, 2001 8:39 PM
>>> by mightychip May 17, 2001 8:52 PM
high sigh by mtmynd May 18, 2001 6:44 AM
long night by chachi May 17, 2001 7:47 PM
beer is best by mightychip May 17, 2001 8:50 PM
sounds like by boxmaker May 30, 2001 9:32 PM
may 16 by mightychip May 17, 2001 2:06 PM
Meister Brau by chachi May 17, 2001 7:33 PM
rumpleminze? by mightychip May 17, 2001 8:48 PM
"a good christian" by jojojeronomo May 17, 2001 9:13 AM
and by joshklo May 17, 2001 9:34 AM
it's o.k. he's a preacher by jojojeronomo May 17, 2001 10:04 AM
spring by jojojeronomo May 17, 2001 8:52 AM
Barfly by gonzobeat May 17, 2001 8:36 AM
gold diggers by gonzobeat May 17, 2001 8:32 AM
filament figment by mtmynd May 17, 2001 8:30 AM
sunvitation by mtmynd May 17, 2001 7:46 AM
convoluted by judih May 17, 2001 7:18 AM
pc--be ruthless or nice by joshklo May 17, 2001 6:54 AM
point em away from me by judih May 16, 2001 6:41 AM
aftershock by mtmynd May 16, 2001 7:29 AM
from mt to full by judih May 16, 2001 8:20 AM
noise of birds versus silence of words by judih May 16, 2001 3:35 AM
relocation by something rash May 15, 2001 7:36 PM
feature this... by mtmynd May 15, 2001 6:23 PM
not enough by slate May 15, 2001 6:57 PM
twist the blade by judih May 15, 2001 5:26 AM
tres... by mtmynd May 15, 2001 5:57 PM
humanist climate by jojojeronomo May 15, 2001 3:24 AM
telepathic by jojojeronomo May 15, 2001 1:40 AM
I saw something disturbing while going to class today by mightychip May 14, 2001 10:41 PM
empty glass ceiling by mtmynd May 14, 2001 8:14 PM
like it by madradiant May 15, 2001 4:09 PM
fresh cheek by judih May 14, 2001 5:57 AM
still by judih May 13, 2001 8:04 PM
physical is far by judih May 13, 2001 10:34 AM
helpless?.....au contrare by zygote May 13, 2001 10:59 AM
introduction by akeru May 12, 2001 10:45 PM
welcome by mightychip May 12, 2001 11:39 PM
that was dope by akeru May 13, 2001 11:39 AM
May 12 by mightychip May 12, 2001 7:59 PM
birds welcome by judih May 12, 2001 7:46 PM
sparrows are birds by mightychip May 12, 2001 7:55 PM
Today I Hate the World (And its Dirty Socks) by Doctor Proteus May 12, 2001 2:52 PM
square pegs by zygote May 12, 2001 10:55 AM
... by mightychip May 12, 2001 5:38 PM
saturday morning by jojojeronomo May 12, 2001 10:44 AM
rocks in the garden by jojojeronomo May 12, 2001 9:59 AM
my universe by jojojeronomo May 12, 2001 9:05 AM
delicious smiles by judih May 12, 2001 9:13 AM
butt naked by jojojeronomo May 12, 2001 8:47 AM
lay dee mad donna by judih May 12, 2001 8:54 AM
shoppin' block by mtmynd May 12, 2001 8:34 AM
forget food by judih May 12, 2001 8:56 AM
lab rat news by jojojeronomo May 12, 2001 2:47 AM
pass the tissues by judih May 12, 2001 9:00 AM
..... by jojojeronomo May 15, 2001 2:21 AM
"........" by judih May 15, 2001 5:03 AM
may 11 by mightychip May 11, 2001 11:23 PM
all heading to over by judih May 11, 2001 8:53 PM
library by mightychip May 10, 2001 9:29 PM
a reflection by otter May 10, 2001 11:55 AM
through the sand blast by judih May 9, 2001 8:35 PM
longhorn haiku #19 by mtmynd May 9, 2001 5:34 PM
while walking today, i noticed there were fewer pigeons than usual, which i thought strange by mightychip May 9, 2001 4:09 PM
left here by lauret May 11, 2001 9:52 AM
dead sheep on the salten sea drinking kool aid and smoking by Doctor Proteus May 9, 2001 2:57 PM
this is for wheel... by mtmynd May 9, 2001 5:29 PM
some hers by judih May 8, 2001 8:21 PM
reined ear by mtmynd May 9, 2001 6:40 AM
trying by try May 8, 2001 7:10 AM
hmmm by tennind May 11, 2001 6:20 AM
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm by joshklo May 17, 2001 7:11 AM
longhorn haiku #18 by mtmynd May 7, 2001 9:09 PM
taps bew gulled by judih May 9, 2001 7:56 AM
gongin my veins by judih May 7, 2001 8:30 PM
kick the cherry by judih May 6, 2001 8:07 PM
zen stem by mtmynd May 7, 2001 6:31 AM
seize the plucked stem by judih May 7, 2001 6:58 AM
write of passage by mtmynd May 6, 2001 6:45 PM
spring snow by angela May 5, 2001 4:23 PM
reply by madradiant May 15, 2001 4:11 PM
the sky by angela May 5, 2001 4:22 PM
Gray's Peak by angela May 5, 2001 4:21 PM
reply by mightychip May 6, 2001 12:53 AM
coffee sherbet by judih May 5, 2001 10:54 AM
great! a question, too.... by Tabloid Footprints May 5, 2001 2:44 PM
cushion or crate by judih May 5, 2001 7:47 PM
May 4 by mightychip May 5, 2001 7:00 AM
none by fountainhead05 May 4, 2001 12:58 PM
some by gonzobeat May 4, 2001 8:28 PM
see man by fountainhead05 May 4, 2001 9:50 PM
trout stream of consciousness by mtmynd May 4, 2001 7:07 AM
toothpick? by judih May 4, 2001 7:12 AM
Herbalife by gonzobeat May 4, 2001 6:24 AM
the cameron's house by dead dog's eye May 3, 2001 8:20 PM
cape islander by dead dog's eye May 3, 2001 8:18 PM
misplaced rejector by judih May 3, 2001 7:43 PM
the scene by gonzobeat May 3, 2001 8:52 AM
ideal by zen beatnick May 3, 2001 9:22 AM
affairs to remember by gonzobeat May 3, 2001 9:46 AM
vegas pimp style by gonzobeat May 3, 2001 5:07 AM
nice by jojo May 3, 2001 6:42 AM
to flirt by zen beatnick May 2, 2001 6:45 PM
pass it on by judih May 3, 2001 7:14 AM
and on by zen beatnick May 3, 2001 7:28 AM
pumping pulse by judih May 3, 2001 7:40 AM
arrival by zen beatnick May 3, 2001 9:05 AM
glass slippers jean kelly by judih May 3, 2001 10:46 PM
! by mightychip May 5, 2001 7:12 AM
joint effort by tennind May 2, 2001 6:42 PM
perfect by rae May 3, 2001 5:08 AM
hawaiian oasis next stop by judih May 2, 2001 12:51 PM
into the moment by mtmynd May 2, 2001 4:39 PM
longhorn haiku #16 by mtmynd May 1, 2001 9:21 PM
longhorn haiku #15 by mtmynd May 1, 2001 4:45 PM
! by judih May 1, 2001 7:02 PM
longhorn haiku #14 by mtmynd May 1, 2001 4:26 PM
lost by tennind May 1, 2001 1:34 PM
no names by rae May 1, 2001 2:08 PM


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