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The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


... by Krev Sep 30, 2001 11:22 AM
:) by Krev Oct 1, 2001 7:40 AM
:| by Krev Oct 1, 2001 6:25 PM
sun flower by mtmynd Sep 30, 2001 9:11 AM
seeds by alton Oct 1, 2001 12:12 PM
no-puter blues by judih Sep 30, 2001 6:12 AM
haiku by donjon Sep 29, 2001 1:31 PM
poo tok by mtmynd Sep 29, 2001 8:49 AM
cold minded? by mtmynd Sep 29, 2001 8:47 AM
mala by buddhabitch Sep 29, 2001 6:17 AM
Synonyms by alton Sep 28, 2001 10:28 AM
shortcut by mtmynd Sep 28, 2001 3:35 PM
My first try by alton Sep 28, 2001 9:49 AM
ah so much by mtmynd Sep 28, 2001 3:30 PM
picture words by alton Sep 28, 2001 4:02 PM
beau jest by buddhabitch Sep 29, 2001 7:56 AM
knot by judih Sep 28, 2001 8:45 AM
daween by mtmynd Sep 28, 2001 3:26 PM
who is it by alton Sep 28, 2001 4:26 PM
cacophony by mtmynd Sep 28, 2001 4:45 PM
precious by judih Sep 28, 2001 8:16 PM
levi by mtmynd Sep 28, 2001 10:21 PM
levitate by judih Sep 28, 2001 10:24 PM
fallacy by mtmynd Sep 28, 2001 10:54 PM
scrumptuous by judih Sep 28, 2001 11:27 PM
beloved by mtmynd Sep 29, 2001 8:14 AM
verbalization by judih Sep 29, 2001 12:17 PM
mischievious by mtmynd Sep 30, 2001 8:06 AM
quiet on the haiku front by Doctor Proteus Sep 28, 2001 6:52 AM
round up a posse by judih Sep 28, 2001 7:13 AM
sub blurbia by mtmynd Sep 28, 2001 7:49 AM
thats it ... by judih Sep 28, 2001 7:56 AM
don't forget to change 'em! by mtmynd Sep 28, 2001 8:04 AM
your turn by judih Sep 28, 2001 8:06 AM
adaptation by alton Sep 28, 2001 10:38 AM
giddy up by buddhabitch Sep 28, 2001 7:57 AM
they stopped shootin round here by judih Sep 28, 2001 8:09 AM
ZooBounderroundacorner... by Doctor Proteus Sep 27, 2001 9:56 AM
continued by alton Sep 28, 2001 2:47 PM
toss the word by judih Sep 27, 2001 9:08 AM
enough by mtmynd Sep 27, 2001 9:38 AM
dark smokey dance floor by judih Sep 27, 2001 9:43 AM
wall flower by buddhabitch Sep 27, 2001 10:02 AM
dance waits for no man by judih Sep 28, 2001 7:38 AM
may I? by mtmynd Sep 28, 2001 8:06 AM
dessssssss per aaado by judih Sep 28, 2001 8:23 AM
convertible by mtmynd Sep 28, 2001 8:30 AM
rutabaga by judih Sep 28, 2001 8:33 AM
sincerity by mtmynd Sep 28, 2001 8:40 AM
his green eyes blinking by lisajude Sep 27, 2001 7:59 AM
jared's birthday by lisajude Sep 27, 2001 7:56 AM
sunrise by lisajude Sep 27, 2001 7:51 AM
cloud by mtmynd Sep 27, 2001 7:25 AM
bocephus by buddhabitch Sep 27, 2001 7:30 AM
ghost by mtmynd Sep 27, 2001 7:34 AM
vision airy by buddhabitch Sep 27, 2001 7:37 AM
Sir Up by mtmynd Sep 27, 2001 7:40 AM
wall zing with you by buddhabitch Sep 27, 2001 7:49 AM
cool dreams by mtmynd Sep 27, 2001 7:57 AM
tableau by buddhabitch Sep 27, 2001 8:06 AM
strange foreign moments by judih Sep 27, 2001 2:16 AM
he who says loser by judih Sep 27, 2001 12:03 AM
eight hours in front by funky_seagull Sep 26, 2001 2:27 PM
wishing by judih Sep 26, 2001 12:28 PM
the gift by buddhabitch Sep 25, 2001 9:29 AM
deep within by mtmynd Sep 24, 2001 3:33 PM
9/25/01 by mtmynd Sep 24, 2001 3:21 PM
seven thirty five p.m. by judih Sep 24, 2001 8:10 PM
day of gold by panta rhei Sep 25, 2001 6:16 AM
yes! golden september by judih Sep 25, 2001 6:21 AM
intrigue by mtmynd Sep 24, 2001 3:18 PM
is real really so bad by judih Sep 24, 2001 1:21 PM
nope, actually it's quite nice by GordonWilson Sep 24, 2001 2:56 PM
honey by zachary Sep 23, 2001 10:21 PM
Black Cloud by Doctor Proteus Sep 23, 2001 1:56 PM
andandand-ku by mtmynd Sep 23, 2001 2:03 PM
lunch by mtmynd Sep 23, 2001 11:11 AM
we, on the other hand, feasted by judih Sep 23, 2001 12:21 PM
:) by Doctor Proteus Sep 23, 2001 12:27 PM
cheese or not to cheese by judih Sep 23, 2001 12:32 PM
mac 'n cheese by mtmynd Sep 23, 2001 2:00 PM
butterfly lingers by Drunken Boat Sep 23, 2001 7:55 AM
big show by mtmynd Sep 23, 2001 8:18 AM
humm a long by buddhabitch Sep 23, 2001 7:18 AM
turkish angora haiku by buddhabitch Sep 23, 2001 6:54 AM
crunch stuffed faces by judih Sep 23, 2001 6:57 AM
Sun Day by mtmynd Sep 23, 2001 6:48 AM
inevitable by judih Sep 22, 2001 7:34 PM
conundrum by buddhabitch Sep 23, 2001 7:45 AM
cecil b demille by jotadavida Sep 22, 2001 9:45 AM
reply-ku by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 9:53 AM
dare i add my humblest gratitude? by judih Sep 22, 2001 10:12 AM
judih-ku by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 10:16 AM
saturn's return by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 8:28 AM
watch cycle by buddhabitch Sep 23, 2001 6:57 AM
saturn by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 8:25 AM
madness by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 8:23 AM
greatest concern by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 8:17 AM
wave of change, the crest is temporal by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 8:15 AM
disipations by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 8:08 AM
temptations by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 7:58 AM
obscurity by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 7:54 AM
chess II by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 7:50 AM
paved by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 7:48 AM
careful by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 7:45 AM
chess by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 7:43 AM
division by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 7:41 AM
sidelines by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 7:31 AM
the call by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 7:26 AM
phoenix by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 7:21 AM
stop mid phoenix by judih Sep 22, 2001 7:25 AM
tao by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 7:38 AM
terror by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 7:17 AM
fickle by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 7:15 AM
beyond by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 7:12 AM
dog duty by mtmynd Sep 22, 2001 7:10 AM
void thoughts by ghost_writer Sep 22, 2001 5:43 AM
matches by judih Sep 22, 2001 3:38 AM
head 'em up by buddhabitch Sep 21, 2001 6:31 AM
dual duel by mtmynd Sep 20, 2001 5:50 PM
clouded facets by orange Sep 20, 2001 12:29 PM
look at you by judih Sep 21, 2001 1:41 PM
autumnal sights by ghost_writer Sep 20, 2001 8:52 AM
bridge by ghost_writer Sep 21, 2001 2:18 PM
Haiku for My Garbage Collector by Doctor Proteus Sep 20, 2001 6:08 AM
that ol' chair by mtmynd Sep 20, 2001 5:46 PM
mad by panta rhei Sep 20, 2001 4:57 AM
lightdrunk by panta rhei Sep 20, 2001 4:42 AM
fenced out by judih Sep 20, 2001 4:29 AM
solitude by panta rhei Sep 20, 2001 4:56 AM
haikus suck, especially mine by coolazice Sep 19, 2001 7:08 PM
aaaarggghh by panta rhei Sep 20, 2001 5:20 AM
haiku for you by unknownpoet Sep 19, 2001 6:52 PM
you got it all by panta rhei Sep 20, 2001 5:16 AM
rest by mtmynd Sep 19, 2001 5:04 PM
sleepdancer by panta rhei Sep 20, 2001 5:11 AM
Zing by Doctor Proteus Sep 19, 2001 10:54 AM
Ping by mtmynd Sep 19, 2001 5:02 PM
sleep blissful sleep by judih Sep 19, 2001 3:23 AM
green man by buddhabitch Sep 19, 2001 10:43 AM
nathan nathan soozen cecil by judih Sep 18, 2001 8:26 PM
Ben by ghost_writer Sep 18, 2001 2:46 PM
final hours by mtmynd Sep 18, 2001 9:05 AM
forever by panta rhei Sep 18, 2001 9:23 AM
out of the woods by buddhabitch Sep 19, 2001 10:49 AM
at the gate by buddhabitch Sep 18, 2001 8:12 AM
new years day by judih Sep 18, 2001 8:16 AM
tired by ghost_writer Sep 18, 2001 2:49 PM
rescue remedy by buddhabitch Sep 18, 2001 5:36 AM
remedies in tandem by judih Sep 18, 2001 6:14 AM
my blueprint by akeru Sep 18, 2001 12:17 AM
akeru by buddhabitch Sep 18, 2001 5:27 AM
...#2 by akeru Sep 18, 2001 12:14 AM
my blueprint #1 by akeru Sep 18, 2001 12:11 AM
sometimes its time for a haiku by judih Sep 17, 2001 11:38 AM
state of grace by buddhabitch Sep 17, 2001 12:15 PM
hsss-tree by mtmynd Sep 18, 2001 6:36 AM
awareness by buddhabitch Sep 17, 2001 9:23 AM
listen to the coffee by judih Sep 17, 2001 11:47 AM
alive by mtmynd Sep 17, 2001 7:11 AM
the storm by buddhabitch Sep 17, 2001 7:04 AM
Love by ribot358 Sep 17, 2001 5:30 AM
Friendship by ribot358 Sep 17, 2001 5:24 AM
WINTER by ribot358 Sep 17, 2001 5:22 AM
the wilderness by ribot358 Sep 17, 2001 5:17 AM
the wilderness by ribot358 Sep 17, 2001 5:16 AM
disolve by mtmynd Sep 16, 2001 9:33 PM
all this filthy boy can figure... by Thefilth Sep 16, 2001 5:28 PM
blue balloon in space by buddhabitch Sep 16, 2001 7:12 AM
big bird by buddhabitch Sep 16, 2001 6:32 AM
hello dali by buddhabitch Sep 16, 2001 6:07 AM
blubberin bartholomew by judih Sep 16, 2001 3:17 AM
Drumming dribble by Bobo Sep 15, 2001 11:30 PM
the fall by buddhabitch Sep 15, 2001 5:29 PM
love away by buddhabitch Sep 14, 2001 9:15 PM
wishing on leaves by judih Sep 14, 2001 9:33 PM
Demystification by Thefilth Sep 14, 2001 8:54 PM
the haiku that will change the world forever by Doctor Proteus Sep 14, 2001 11:03 AM
worked for me by judih Sep 14, 2001 11:22 AM
Untitled by AngelHeadedHipster Sep 14, 2001 9:53 AM
on the road by buddhabitch Sep 14, 2001 8:37 AM
submit no answers by Thefilth Sep 13, 2001 7:32 PM
pax not tax by buddhabitch Sep 13, 2001 7:06 PM
the smoke clears by buddhabitch Sep 13, 2001 6:25 PM
check the doc's hands by judih Sep 13, 2001 7:20 PM
as the wheel turns... by buddhabitch Sep 14, 2001 8:28 AM
final our by mtmynd Sep 13, 2001 8:27 AM
sorry by stevadore Sep 13, 2001 8:18 AM
AL by stevadore Sep 13, 2001 8:18 AM
Chopped missile by Thefilth Sep 12, 2001 8:16 PM
future getting closer by judih Sep 12, 2001 7:58 PM
plea-ku by mtmynd Sep 12, 2001 7:17 AM
plea-ku by KarinMGrayson Sep 13, 2001 3:49 PM
thank-ku by mtmynd Sep 13, 2001 9:03 PM
observation haiku by buddhabitch Sep 12, 2001 7:08 AM
mornings back by judih Sep 12, 2001 5:46 AM
minuet tete a tete by judih Sep 12, 2001 2:14 AM
a bird flew by Thefilth Sep 11, 2001 6:03 PM
glass shower by Doctor Proteus Sep 11, 2001 2:55 PM
clouds flames ashes by judih Sep 11, 2001 10:22 AM
terror by mtmynd Sep 11, 2001 8:41 AM
collapse of security by buddhabitch Sep 11, 2001 8:37 AM
zzzippp by mtmynd Sep 11, 2001 6:34 AM
Haiku of Paranoia by Doctor Proteus Sep 10, 2001 1:51 PM
not by Thefilth Sep 10, 2001 10:10 PM
bless me haiku by buddhabitch Sep 10, 2001 6:28 AM
:) by Doctor Proteus Sep 10, 2001 10:54 AM
shmuck lucks #13 by mtmynd Sep 10, 2001 6:08 AM
ribit by Doctor Proteus Sep 10, 2001 10:57 AM
try your slinky wink on some other dame by judih Sep 10, 2001 4:55 AM
private property by buddhabitch Sep 10, 2001 6:34 AM
earthquakes by judih Sep 9, 2001 7:47 PM
fish dog soup by jotadavida Sep 9, 2001 1:05 PM
Haiku 4007 by Doctor Proteus Sep 9, 2001 12:01 PM
howdy by mtmynd Sep 9, 2001 11:30 AM
ridin the merry perfection blues by judih Sep 9, 2001 6:54 AM
everyday ends by mtmynd Sep 9, 2001 8:33 AM
Time to Explode - N. West Haikus by jamesd Sep 8, 2001 3:12 PM
gettin confused by judih Sep 7, 2001 11:01 PM
yo dai by mtmynd Sep 8, 2001 8:49 AM
this globe this room by jotadavida Sep 8, 2001 8:51 AM
purple by mtmynd Sep 7, 2001 7:09 AM
Woman by Monsanto Sep 6, 2001 4:15 AM
comfort squash by judih Sep 6, 2001 6:11 AM
The Big Picture by Monsanto Sep 6, 2001 4:12 AM
Tears by Monsanto Sep 6, 2001 4:09 AM
head throbbing by Bobo Sep 6, 2001 4:09 AM
be leaf by buddhabitch Sep 4, 2001 7:27 AM
echo travels by judih Sep 5, 2001 7:39 PM
the big show haiku by buddhabitch Sep 4, 2001 6:46 AM
mountain haiku by buddhabitch Sep 4, 2001 6:40 AM
little ditty haiku by buddhabitch Sep 4, 2001 6:35 AM
violence will get you no where by judih Sep 4, 2001 3:24 AM
no not yet by judih Sep 3, 2001 6:17 AM
half-groggy backpacker's haiku by unknownpoet Sep 3, 2001 2:38 AM
untitled by unknownpoet Sep 3, 2001 2:34 AM
butterflies on the flowers of graves by unknownpoet Sep 3, 2001 2:30 AM
watch it or I'm gonna sick my metaphor on you by unknownpoet Sep 3, 2001 2:27 AM
lose it by judih Sep 2, 2001 8:19 PM
the new message by orange Sep 2, 2001 12:24 PM
orange by stedie-eddie Sep 2, 2001 2:14 PM
wish i could sing harmonies by judih Sep 2, 2001 10:22 AM
sound of mind by judih Sep 2, 2001 2:31 AM


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